Sorry for the delay: I got sick over the weekend (sneeze, sneeze) and forgot to upload the essays for this Thursday’s critique session. Here they are:
That should do it. Tomorrow, we’ll be discussing your essay-writing process and I’ll be discussing formatting, since it seems (from what you’ve been emailing me) that many of you still don’t have a good handle on formatting. We’ll also discuss structure, and I’ll take questions on areas that are troubling you.