Comments for Essay Composition 1, Spring 08

Comment on Interracial Marriages by Jin Choi

Jin Choi — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 03:07:55 +0000

Of course marriage is important in people’s life. No matter why they get married(to get a citizenship or love), they would think carefully. In the case of Southeast Asia mother, they took advantage of marrige to live better life. That’s a problem, if they know their spouse that will be well, they will overcome their invisible harsh life.
A friend of mine got married with mexican last year and they got a baby. they loved each other so they got married. She’s living in mexico now. the only problem is she sometimes misses korea. she says she is happy.
of course interracial marriages looks harder than normal(?). anyway, I think whether what kind of marrige people will do, they think carefully.

Comment on Interracial Marriages by Jin-woo Kim

Jin-woo Kim — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 09:41:06 +0000

I agree your argument. I read the article about problem of Southeast Asia mother. They can’t speak Korean, so they are hard to communicate their children. In addition, their children can’t doing well with their classmate because they look different. This is serious problem. However, interracial marriage allows us to learn foreign language naturally. Our present society is global era, so it is big benefit. What do you think about?

Comment on We should have good table manners by kim geunyoung

kim geunyoung — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 06:50:45 +0000

I think it is important we keep our culture with others.

I mean that is “acculturation” not assimilation.

Keeping only ours is not fit in international world.

In a various ethnic, there are vairous culture, various people with has

those. If we live together in harmont, we need to take the system of

the cultures in many ciuntries.

Comment on Writing one essay in one term(assignment) by swity89414

swity89414 — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 03:02:27 +0000

I agree with you, too. I have the same topic with you and have the similar opinion. For the university students, I think everyone knows that how to write an essay but not everybody knows how to write a perfect essay. Write an essay is not like make production in a factory but like make an artwork. Write 1 essay in 1 term that can give us enough time to think to make our essays valuable…

Comment on Writing one essay in one term(assignment) by swity89414

swity89414 — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 02:52:26 +0000

I’m sorry …..I thought save=publish……..i I have the drafts many days before but didn’t publish it until today… I didn’t notice …….I’m sorry …Please forgive me ……..please please….

Comment on Write 1 essay in 1 term is good for our English writing by swity89414

swity89414 — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 02:51:38 +0000

Comment on To my professor by swity89414

swity89414 — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 02:50:39 +0000

Comment on Causing an Unheaval by Mistranslation by Jin-woo Kim

Jin-woo Kim — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 03:25:08 +0000

I agree with your opinion. I heard that American cow is safe, but many people seem to be sure it is safe or not. I think it is mass media’s responsibility. Considering about this case, I can feel mass media’s power and how they can influence other people. I don’t think mass media is always true. Sometimes, they report misinformation and can be distorted. So, we should try to find what real truth is.

Comment on The air pollution from car exhaust by Jin-woo Kim

Jin-woo Kim — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 03:16:23 +0000

I agree your opinion. We already have known serious air pollution problem, and we try to solve this problem like you mentioned. However, it seems to be solved easily. Because automobile is necessities now all people. Recently, as high oil price, people try to take public transportation and save oil price, but I think many people still use their own car. So, I hope electricity car will common use soon and many people will practice you mentioned method.

Comment on Cosmetic Surgery by Jin-woo Kim

Jin-woo Kim — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 03:00:43 +0000

I agree your opinion. Of course, we pursue external beauty so far, we should consider inner beauty because external beauty is easily changed as you grow a year older, but inner beauty is hardly changed. So, inner beauty shows person’s real characteristic, I think.