Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

Writing diary is good for your stress.

Student have many stress. They get stress when they get “F” score, or break their lover. They try to get solved stress. For example, they drink alcohol with friends, or go to a Noraebang(the Korean com-mercial singing establishment). Sometimes they cry. There are good way, but writing diary can be best way. There are some reason. First, you can express your nagative emotion. This process have treatment effect. For example, I felt sad today, I wrote this emotion and why I felt this. After than, I feel more comfortable. Second, you can change your think. Because writing your thinking adjusts your intention. So, writing diary is good for you.


Terrible rat

I don’t like rat. when I was young, rat trespess into my house. It nibbles my curtain and some food like apple. Rat has many problem. First, they infect many disease. For example, plague. Because rat is very dirty, they make many disease. Second, they eat everything like food, wall, curtain, and dress.  So, we have to dumping this. Finally, It is difficult that catch them. They bigger than bug, they are more dangerous. So, we are careful them. we have to clean the kitchen and haven’t to spill food in home.This is way of prevention


Way of make test plane.

People agree that plan is more helpful for test. But they make a plan hardly. so they don’t practice this plan. Also they think making plan is difficult. There are some way of make plan for test. Fisrt, you write your subjects and date. Second, you think what is most important subject. You arrange this subject in early date. Then, you divide subject category. Next, you arrange subject in date. Finally you just practice!


Where is this place?

I sometimes go there because I was dirty or tired. This place is divided two part by sex. If you into there, you will feel hot or warm. Inside of this place is composed by tile, and filled steam. This place have many mirror and water. Almost woman don’t like go there with friend becase they are shy to show their body line. We must pay for interance. Also, we need bring something like soap, towel, shampoo, and bodylotion. Can you know this place?


Cellular phone can become your only friend.

Do you have cellular phone? Almost every person maybe have cellular phone. I have cellular phone also, but thesedays my phone stop their skill. Because my phone breakdown. First time I feel uncomfortable because I used to send message with phone and recieve connection. I can’t touch anyone after my phone breakdown. However I feel free as time passed.  I can get out of phone. I can see the beautiful scene instead of sending letter through phone when I go to school. Also, I have time for thinking. I have chance to talking with person who sitting beside me. Cellular phone give us comportable, but It can take our something more importance.


My valuable birthday.

I’m my parent’s elder daughter. My sister express her feeling, about my parent well, but I’m so shy that I couldn’t express them. I love them very much. But way of expression my love was only that study hard, and pray for them. When I was high school student, I got up and ate my birthday “Mi Youck Guck” (brown seaweed soup). My parent already went to their office. But I felt their love. So, I decided to tell them and I called my mother, and I said ” I love you, thank you “. I was crying when she told me ” I know your love, I proud you”. That day is my best birthday.


forgetfulness can be present.

I felt uncomportable. Because I didn’t remember something. Than I think ‘Why God make me to forget? ‘ But If we never forget, we will be hypochonkriac. Because everyone has bad memory. Forgetfulness is way of conquest. For example, I broke my ex- boyfriend who meet for four years last year. I wanted to he comeback to me, but he never comeback. I was crying when I though memory about he. But I forgot him slowly time pass away. So I can something I have to do, smile again, and meet new boyfriend. Also, If we remember everything, we will hard for find memory we need. Because we have too many memory in our brain. So, sometimes forgetfulness make you very hard, but It need us.


short story

Their who the pool and the rich disparity growing quickly. The rich make money and raise position. For example, some rich have special pet. It’s a lion. I don’t know that is true, but they have big garden that lion is able to live there. Also people wear diamond. However pool can’t eat enough, and have to hard work. So, disease spread quickly. For examplen, Malaria spreads quicky in Africa. They died. Becase they couldn’t be treat. Disease attack the pool like tiger attacks people. We need to think about poverty and wealth.


Romeo and Juliet effect.

Do you know ‘ Romeo and Juliet effect’ ? It is used in psychology. It means that love is more powerful when someone opposed their love. I hadn’t experienced this effect, but I felt this recently. Do you think this effect is real? I think it is clearly true. For example, I argued with my boyfriend almost everyday. I was making peace with my boyfriend after I argued with him. I suddenly asked him for going my home. He worried about his costume, but I asked him again and again. So, he bought chicken for my parents, and went my home. But my parents thought he is rude. Because he didn’t prepare for meeting. He wore sportswear and slippers. They rebuked him for etiquette, and said me ” You don’t invite him after this time. ” I felt sorry to him. But  far from blaming me, he comforted me , instead. We don’t argue untill now but also think much of each other.


Plan is make you more smart man.

Have you ever make a plan? Almost everyone maybe learned making summer vacation plan in elementary school. Because people have to think about their time, importance of works, and order for making plan, they decide that making plan is difficult. But we live in high tech period. Everything change quickly. So, making plan is important to you. It make you to remember important works. That is very principal. For example, although I’m university student, I have many work like each subject’s homework, club meeting, church work. If I don’t make any plan, I will miss something importance. Also, making plan make you more easy approch to your goal.


Ant is terrible insect.

Ants lived my home in last year. Rhey make many problem. But main problem is that they make hole everywhere in my house. For example, they make hole in wall, wall clock, plants, food. The holes look like black dots. That spoiled home decoration. Hole would be home for new ant. They spreaded quickly around hole. Also, their hole killed other living. For example, my mother like to growing plants like orchid. Because ant graw at their root and leaves, they were dying when my mother found them. So, my family were careful about putting food in kitchen.


Kind man who I know

He is my club’s senior. He is very kind man. He take care of me. Also, he after my younger sister. For example, my sister had big test for university entrance in last year. He didn’t meet my sister, but he gave taffy to her. So, she got more support, and felt happy. Moreover He relieves me when I need help. For example, I didn’t recieve money from my part time job employer. I asked my money, but she only said ” O.k. I will give you. ” I told him. Because I wait for two month, but she didn’t give money. He called her, and said. So, I recieve my money after than. Because he kind to other people like doing to me. Almost every my club members like him. Also, I like him very much. I want to take after him.


Stingy person who I heard.

Min-Ho is Jung-Myoung’s high school friend. He has many good points, but He too love save money. he don’t like spend money for his friend. That is his big weakness. For example, She met him in school store at one time. He paid some eating for her. They was talking merrily untill another friend came to them. He mischievously ask for paying some eating to Min-Ho. But he spoke in stiff manner, and  refused his ask. Min-Ho didn’t want to spend money for him. Because He didn’t spend money for Min-Ho. However Jung-Myoung bought dinner for Min- Ho.


Where is this place?

 This place is separated two part by sex. Everyone have to go there everyday. There is conveniently mirror. We can wash our hand in there. There are many resemblingly doors. Most of that place are composed sleek tiles. That is essential place to people, but they don’t like that place. Because that have bad smell. Sometimes that place is used talking in secrecy for women. Do you know this place?


I Love This Place

Have you ever go to this place? There are many people. Specially you can see kindly people who wear neatly uniform. The addition to you can smell roasted corn. This place enjoy popularity when you first date with your lover. There are many pictures that printed famous actor and actress. If you want go in that place, you will pay for entrance fee. That place has comfortable armchairs. I love this place. Because it give me various experience. For example, one day I could became tragical woman whose sick lover, and another day I could became  great pilot. Do you know this place?


Way to clean the room

First, you open the window.

Next, you arrange your cloths, books or another thing.

Then, you sweep your room with a broom.

Finally, you wipe ypur room with duster.


Kim-Chi fried rice (one person)

half root Kim-Chi, a egg, one bowl rice, half onion, one gobbet of ham, half carrot, half piece cheese.

Kim-Chi fried rice is good for your health. Because it’s material include nutritive. It’s cuisine isd very easy and convenience. If you aren’t good cooker, you could try this cuisine. First, you have to cut fine onion, Kim-Chi, carrot, ham. Second, you fry onion, Kim-Chi, carrot, ham with olive oil. Then, you put rice in frypan, fry with another material. Finally, you fry with egg.


What is love ?

 What is love?

I loved one man in very long time, now I fall in love another man. But I still feel hard to define about love. First time, I think love is happy, but I love him when I have a quarrel with him. So, love is understanding, trust and consideration. If we don’t have this one , we won’t go on our love. Because we argue who is right.

Passion about love to the other man  is maintained by understanding, trust and consideration.

 


Rice that eat in morning improves your grade.

Have you ever skip your eating for test study? It would be bad to your grade on the contrary.

 Rice play important part. Fist, our brain still sleeping during two or three hour after get up, but rice makes your brain wake up early. Because rice has protein, and it stimulates your brain. If you don’t eat rice in the morning, your brain could still sleeping in test.

 Second, rice give more energy. Rice also has grape sugar that help activation  intellectual part of brain. It can be good method If you want get good grade.

 Eating rice  rather than studing when you can eating improves your grade. Let’s go eating rice !!


Secret process that enjoy eating of rice in Korea

Do you like rise? If you don’t like rise , you will find way to come close to rise.

 There is method that you make more enjoy eating of rice. It is easy you thinked. You need to only one kitchen utensils. Do you know Korea traditional iron pot? This name is “Ga-Ma” that look like  turtle’s back. It makes rice more delicious.

 What is trait of the “Ga-Ma” make rise more good? That is cover’s weight and round bottom. Heavy cover presses iron pot , and pressur of inside get high. So it makes rice ripe. Also round bottom makes rise fluid. So rice isn’t pounded.

 After all , Ga-Ma has scientific principles. That is secret process that enjoy eating of rice in Korea.


Dance is strong point to fresh man in Korea.

 Korean university students have many part and M.T in March. This time is  term that making social relation ship and chance that leting know me to other person.

 However there are many people , so we don’t remember all of them. Specially, informing theirselves is important thing to freshman.

They can sing a song and tell something funy , but  If they dance, they will give strong impression. Dance can carving a seal to other person.

Therefor If you are fresh man,  how about dancing in party?


Person who has good personality can be pretty person.

 We can find fact that hansome or pretty person has considerate personality but ugly person always has bad personality in TV drama.

 Do you think character is connected with looking? Person who has polite personality can has good looking.

 Although young man has freckled and bad outward If he try think and friendly to other people, almost every his work will be smooth thing, and he become having nice apperance old man.

 But although he has beautiful looking If he has always grouchy expression, he will has wrinkled looking.

 Smile and good personality can make us beautiful person.

 


Diet is effort for training ability in Korea.

Last year Yo- ga diet  become popular in Korea. Someone who have opinion that diet is bad to health criti-cize  diet.

 However diet has many merit. They feel more pride as go on a diet and slim person look like more devoted than fat person.

 Specialy good looks is important thing in Korea. Good looks can merit to working intervew and love. If person have same condition, intervewer will prefers more good looks than common looks . I think effort for good looks help you became more special person.


There is flower that have a teaching like a “Halmi flower”.

There is many flower like Rose, Freesia, Tulip. How make many flower’s name ?

 One way is making name from teaching story like “Halmi flower” that mean is grandmother flower in Korea. “Halmi flower” ‘s story is that one mother who have three daughter visited her dauhgter’s home for live with them but they rejected her help. During she look for location of her daughter’s home , she was tired and felt cold. After all she pass away in road. The flower bloom that spot. This flower called “Halmi flower”. This story give theaching that we have to respect our parent.

 Sometimes flower’s name make from their trait. However name having teaching story give chance to thinking about that mean.


People drink alcohol more for social reason than for personal reason in Korea.

Someone drink alcohol for removing depression but people drink alcohol more for social reason than for personal reason in Korea. Korean have many party for each troup and people tempted drinking alcohol by his friends or co-worker. What is more worst, although they have many task almost every Korean go to drinking.

 Reason of this situation is that social relation ship is important thing for Korean. Korea was agriculture society so they need  someone who work with them easily. In this society, cooperation is important thing.

 Like this, society background make imprtant thing that social relation ship to us.

We can explan why people drinking for social reason.


I love English?!

Hi~ My name is Jang Han- a. My major is Language & Curture.

this is my first time I writing something in this page.

my hert fluttered that reason.

my first writing thema is my English story .

Despite my major is English, I don’t use English well.

I like English when I ’m highschool student (becuse I just like English more than Math.)

so  I say ” English is funny and easy . Ha Ha~~ ^ ^ ”

However I learn English more and more, I feel confused.

Recently  I say ” English is too hard. English is my enemy!!! ”

Do you think I love English?

I don’t know how change my  attitude toward English.

But I sure I will try and try again study English because I love my dream.

English is important for my dream.