Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

My unusual brother

  My brother has some bad habits. First, he sleeps and gets up late. Because of further distance from home to his school, he has to get up earlier. But he gets up late, because he goes to bed late. He needs an effort for them. Second, he plays computer games for a long time. He usually wastes time to play computer games for hours in week day and 14 hours in weekend. That will be bad for his health. Lastly, he hates doing exercise. He dislikes to sweat and run, so he is putting on flesh. Although he realized the seriousness of the lack of exercise, he doesn’t try to get rid of that. 


How to play fun in Karaoke.

I like singing songs. My friends also like singing. So my friends and  I sometimes go to karaoke to play. Then ow could we play fun in Karaoke? I’ll tell you how to. First, don’t go karaoke without drinking. You cannot bring so-ju in to karaoke. So you must drink somewhere outside and then go to karaoke after drinking. Your friends and you are a bit drunk, so you can play more  magnanimously. If you are not, maybe you can’t play well because it’s a little ashamed. Second, sing songs like rock or dance musics. If you  sing a ballade it can destroy the atmosphere in the karaoke. Sing songs in high tempo. It can make people to feel more exciting. Actually, there is no way to play fun but, the most important thing is to go there with the person you like. Be more friendly with your friends and make good relationships with them. 


My favorite soccer player

I love playing soccer. Also I like watching a soccer game. I want to talk about my favorite soccer player. My favorite player is  Park Ji-sung. He is a member of a popular club team Manchester United. This year was the first year in the team,but he did a very good job  in his team. Almost all Koreans are proud of Ji-sung. When I went to see a soccer game on 26, May, 2006  with Bosnia Herzegovina everyone in the stadium made a big shout to Ji-sung. Now, he became the world star. I like him because in my oppinion he is the best among Korean players. His physical stamina is like an engine. He never gets tired during the game. I like the way he plays. I hope Ji-sung will do his best job on this World Cup in Germany.


My hard university life

I think that my university life is really hard for several reasons. First, there are bunch of homework. Because the presentation assignment is mandatory in every major course, I have a lot of things to prepare. I have to spend most of my time to do my assignment and prepare exam. Second, I have few friends. Because my department is mostly composed of female students, the circumstance is really depressed and cold. I think most female students are reluctant to associate with someone new. Finally, whole school life is monotonous and boring. Everything in school repeats again and again. I hope to do something new and meet somebody new, but all the environment condition prevents me from doing that way. I hope to walk the path that is different from the one I used to follow from next week.


KUMDO is really beneficial

KUM-DO is really beneficial for several reasons. First, KUM-DO improves my concentration ability. Because the wooden sward is not light, it requires a lot of concentration for me to brandish accurately. The accurate KUM-DO action cannot be made without concentration. Second, it improves my physical strength. After I practice sward action many times, I can feel that I gain muscle and power. I think that only holding the sward require substantial amounts of physical strength. Finally, it gives me motivation for life. After I work out hard, I am usually soaked with perspiration. Whenever I sweat profusely, I feel that I ‘m alive. Perspiration encourages me to live with positive and refreshing mind.


My unusual friend

My friend is really unusual. He trusts somone easily because he is too naive. He think that he got closed with someone if the person nice to him a little bit. For example, he think that he is closed with somebody if the person put some comments on his writing on the internet bulletine board. So he often send a text message and say hello althouth the opponent rarely respond to it.   And the opponent doesn’t think that they are closed at all. Even though all his neighborhood act like they are his good friend, they are not a real friend but only somebody he knew. They seems like good friend, but most of them are not valuable person as much as he trust. But he believe that all his classmates and neiborhoods are his closest friend. He will pull himself together once he experience strong betray. But sometimes I envy him because he can do what i cannot.


Mosquito is the biggest problem.

Mosquitoes have become big trouble for several reasons. First, mosquito transmites epidemics to the people. Because the summer is coming, there are many mosquitoes which are infected by Japanese encephalitis. Second, mosquitoes disturb my sleeping at night. Because they fly around my ears and make noisy, it irritates me. After Mosquitoes bite my arms and legs, the spot is really itch and swells up. Finally, mosquitoes take my most valuable things from me. It costs me a lot of money to buy mosquito repellent, spray, and mosquito net. Because money is most important thing in my life, I have to save my money and refrain myself from spending money.


How to Throw Off Cold Promptly

Cold comes whenever people get tired. It is good that throw off cold as fast as possible because if it will be long, it cause mess in your whole life. Therefore, you must know good hehavior for getting rid of cold. Fist, sleep well. sleep is important thing for increasing your health, so you have to sleep appropriately even if you have many works to do. Second, drink water. Enough water keep you healthy, and even it is helpful for healing. If you have sore throat, drinking water is must be needed. Third, open windows. Changing of air is natural thing in daily life, but, especially, a weaker having a cold need fresh air although the person feel a chill.


Annoying Fly

Flies are very annoying insect in summer for three reasons. First,  flies carry herm and disease like cockroaches. It is a reason that makes food get bad. Second, flies are very dirty because they like to visit or live in trash. It is so disgusting. Third, the sound of flying is terrible to tired people under the strong sun. Flies are difficult to catch, and whenever invade people’s space, so people can’t be away from it.