Elementary Composition – Night

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The Best movie I’ve ever seen

I’m Sam is my best movie I’ve ever seen! Have you seen this movie? It’s a drama about smart daughter and father who is middle-aged, but has five-year-old’s mind. Society thinks he doesn’t have ability to bring up his daughter. In a court, a judge decides to seperate them, but they miss each other, so her father Sam emplays lawyer who doesn’t have good relationship her wife, and try to look herself perfect. He also win the court, and solve her problems. Nobody can stop to meet! Finally, they live together.

I like his trial to find daughter, and his smart girl who loves her father Sam very much. Their acting is very great! I’m moving in touch whenever I watch this movie. It rates 120%. It is the best movie I’ve ever seen.


My grandmother said “what do you think the best importances for your life?”

When I was young, my grandmother told me a interesting story. Even if I was grown up, my heart still remain her story with strong impression. Let’s start what grandmother said. She told me there are three things for your success. The factors of success are money, honer, and health.  she compared three success to circle ball. 

First, money is made of basketball. If you lose the ball, do not worry about it because the ball will be rebounded. If you try to catch the ball, you can easily get it.

Second, honor is made of tennis ball. If you lose the ball, do also not worry because it will also be rebounded. If you try to catch the ball, you can get it. It is only more difficult than the basketball.

Third, health is made of glass ball. If you lose the ball, It is never rebounded. Because It is completely broken, you will fail to catch the ball one hundred percent.

In conclusion, you keep in mind what kind of the best important thing while you live your life. You always recognize that in your heart in depth.


Life is not a speed but direction.

I have a dream for my life. At now I am progressing step by step in many courses.

   Firstly, My goal is that I pass the public officer exam. Its exam is related with emigration and immigration. Because I learn English In Catholic University, I do not study the public offer exam. At the end of this semester, I am going to do temporary absence from University for my study. I will do my best my study even though the exam is difficult.

   Secondly, after passing the exam, I will marry as soon as possible. I really want to make my household with beautiful my wife and cute children.

   Thirdly, I will earn the much money for my future company. Probably, I will have two jobs, or I will invest in real estate for earning much money. And then I will make the my company. It will help for people who is living a laborious life rather than it earn the money for managing company. My company will find out a direction and support for wandering people.

    At last, after leaving my company, I will write my an autobiography about my rewarding life. If my book help only one person who find their life value, I will very happy after I die.


Romeo and Juliet effect.

Do you know ‘ Romeo and Juliet effect’ ? It is used in psychology. It means that love is more powerful when someone opposed their love. I hadn’t experienced this effect, but I felt this recently. Do you think this effect is real? I think it is clearly true. For example, I argued with my boyfriend almost everyday. I was making peace with my boyfriend after I argued with him. I suddenly asked him for going my home. He worried about his costume, but I asked him again and again. So, he bought chicken for my parents, and went my home. But my parents thought he is rude. Because he didn’t prepare for meeting. He wore sportswear and slippers. They rebuked him for etiquette, and said me ” You don’t invite him after this time. ” I felt sorry to him. But  far from blaming me, he comforted me , instead. We don’t argue untill now but also think much of each other.


Plan is make you more smart man.

Have you ever make a plan? Almost everyone maybe learned making summer vacation plan in elementary school. Because people have to think about their time, importance of works, and order for making plan, they decide that making plan is difficult. But we live in high tech period. Everything change quickly. So, making plan is important to you. It make you to remember important works. That is very principal. For example, although I’m university student, I have many work like each subject’s homework, club meeting, church work. If I don’t make any plan, I will miss something importance. Also, making plan make you more easy approch to your goal.


Ant is terrible insect.

Ants lived my home in last year. Rhey make many problem. But main problem is that they make hole everywhere in my house. For example, they make hole in wall, wall clock, plants, food. The holes look like black dots. That spoiled home decoration. Hole would be home for new ant. They spreaded quickly around hole. Also, their hole killed other living. For example, my mother like to growing plants like orchid. Because ant graw at their root and leaves, they were dying when my mother found them. So, my family were careful about putting food in kitchen.


Kind man who I know

He is my club’s senior. He is very kind man. He take care of me. Also, he after my younger sister. For example, my sister had big test for university entrance in last year. He didn’t meet my sister, but he gave taffy to her. So, she got more support, and felt happy. Moreover He relieves me when I need help. For example, I didn’t recieve money from my part time job employer. I asked my money, but she only said ” O.k. I will give you. ” I told him. Because I wait for two month, but she didn’t give money. He called her, and said. So, I recieve my money after than. Because he kind to other people like doing to me. Almost every my club members like him. Also, I like him very much. I want to take after him.


having dinner with any famous person in the world !

If you could have dinner with any famous person in the world,
who would you meet and what would you talk about?

I hope to meet the president of catholic university (our school). His name is Im Byung Hun. He is now a father and president. I have known him since I entered our school. We want to know him still actually we don’t know well. 
One day when I was studying in the library, he went passed there. but, we couldn’t recognize him, because he was simple in style as if he take a walk in sports clothes. He came up to us and bought an ice cream. He encouraged me to study hard. His figure very impressed me. He must be warm-hearted personality. After that, We are used to meeting him. 

 If I could have a dinner with him, I would like to hear about his history.  Also I have some following question. ”What do you think in popular secret among the students?” “What’s your favorite student type?” and so on. Given a chance, also, I’ll claim student’s error thing in face to face. For example, “we need an active support to all club.” “We want to improve our school dining room, please” and so on. I think, A great person is never far from us. Because there are many respectable person around me.  


How would you describe yourself as a human being?

Here are some about my stories. I have inherited my personality in halves from each of my parents because I have my father’s outgoing personality, I like to make friends. and I have been maintaining good personal relationships ,and I have a lot of friends around me. When I meet my friends by accident or talks to them over the phone, I often feel happy. Even, I tend to talkative to them, and then, I feel stress away. The other side, I have a shy side in my personality from my mother. So, in an ironic, I am calm and patient. Especially, when I was young, I couldn’t talk well with acquainted people in any strange place. But, this was improved as I grew older. I think I received a lot of help from my friends and teacher. 

Now, I will write you about my strength and weakness for more. My perseverance is one of my good points. I never give up easily though I can’t handle something. I never get angry easily as well. This enabled me to take a cautious in every matter. Also I am a warm-hearted person. Whenever I watch a touching sight in TV, I often shed tears.  Above all things, my weak point is sometimes lazy. Although I have too much sleep, I am striving to get up early and not still up late. Another my weakness is also my habit to postpone frequently what I have to do today. I’ll overcome my  weaknesses in planning a day. I’m sure this bad habit has been improved. Also, I believe that I become a more sincere person.


Lucky Tiger, Unlucky Lion

There was a small and quiet village, and there lived a people who likes  wearing diamond. It was kind of their own culture, so people wear diamond everyday. One day, people has been attacked by Malaria. Unfortunately Malaria spreads easily, so almost of people suffered from that. That day, tiger attacks people who can’t defend themselves becasue of deases. Also lion attacks peole who another villiage people who don’t wear  diamond. It’s a lion who die because of Malaria. Tigers survive from Malaria, becasue tigers eat diamond. Diamond has a protect ability from disease.


I dont’ like her, because of her selfish attitude.

She is very selfish, because she is the youngest of the family who has  spoiled her very much. Because she is also like shopping, I have to shop with her whether I am tired or not. She is a stingy girl, so I have to buy her meal! I don’t like her, so I don’t want to meet her anymore.