Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

the Changing Role of Women

  When fifty years ago, women and men had each of their separate positions. Most women stayed at home doing all the housework and raising all the dhildren. On the other hand, most men worked outside on the farms or in the companies to earn the money and to support their families. 

  But today we can see that a lot of things have changed for women. They don’t have to be doomed to do housework for the rest of their lives. They can be successful business persons. They are not obliged to have 100% responsibility for doing housework or raising their children. There are also more specific laws for women being enacted. Nowadays, most women are as well educated as men. They have more opportunities to apply for jobs, too.    


I love Park Ji sung~

He is not handsome, but sincere, When he enter Europe league first time, nobody can tell his sucess. However, he suceed. Lately, his feet picture is famous on internet world. His feet are flatfeed and it have many hurts. Nevertheless, I like it, because the picture tell almost his effort. Many Korean said if he is more handsome, he will be more popular than David Beckham in Korea. I think that his play have already pass over Beckham’s play. Recently,  the Korean national soccer team make little progress at a Worldcup try out match. People doubt to go next round at the worldcup, but I think that we can go next round because we have Park. I believe him. Let’s support our team~~^^


The most impressive movie I ever saw was ‘If Only’

 If I go to a theater, I would a movie starting the first because I don’t care about my favorite genre, If Only is one of them. I watched it without watching a pre-film because If Only was a movie which extempore watched with my friends. At first, I knew it was just a melo movie and regretted watching this movie if I feel to be a little bored. But it was not a simple romance movie but a sad novie mixed by a little fantastic factor, the figure of a male hero who definitely tried in order to block the death of his lover in the situation taking place happenings a day ago made me feel to be cold to my backbone.From now on, I began not to watch the pre-film of a movie.


choice of a job is important.

A choice of a job is important for better life. A good workplace should be a work I like and enjoy because I have to work forever.  In every aspects, it should be sound and stable. It should be paid a high annual salary. It shoul be guaranteed a diverse insurances.  It should have a vision in the future. It is better if an international enterprise like Mcdonald and GE.  It has to have a structure which can open our ability with our best skill.  I have to carefully choose the job because choosing the job for my better life can influence my children who will be born in the future.


An example of Korean Wave Bae Yong Jun.

 Bae Yong Jun is the best actor of Korea and currently the best star of Korean Wave. With the role of Junsang took on Winter Sonata, he is much loved by many fans thanks to his pure image. He had brought an explosive popularity in the southesatern countries, Japan, China, Thailand, etc. and is much loved in many countries, the north America, the U.S. and Canada, etc. and Arab. He is called Yonsama in Japan, the strong wind of Yonsama has been much contributed to enhance the cultural and economic image of Korea


Do you like to read comic book?

It is really hot day, and makes me discourage. I think I am really strong during summer, but I am exhausted because of weather. However, it is cool to spend time in library to read comic book. Even though I was not going to read comic, I did to avoid being exhausted. Its title is “Touch,�? and I don’t know its mean because I don’t read all, but it is really interesting. As there are 10 volumes, it will take long time. So you had not better read because it may waste time. However if you read that book, you may not be able to read. If you want to read, contact me, and I will give you. Anyway, I was really happy to meet you in Gord’s class. Have a nice summer vacation.

 


Valentine’s Day

  There are a lot of stories about origins of Valentine’s Day. One historian speaks that Valentine’s Day stems from Rome’s Saint Valentine’s Day(St. Valentine). At that time the Emperor Claudius wanted to draw young men in the army, so he imposed a ban on marriage. Hereupon Valentine opposed a ban on marriage, and united some pair of lovers in marriage. He was martyred on A.D. February 14, 269 through that crime. Before Valentine was killed, he fell in love with the daughter of his jailer. He left a letter called “Love from Valentine” for her, and then it was become custom to convey a message of love on Valentine’s Day.      

  There are other stories about origins of Valentine’s Day. The English believed that time of February 14 was a mating day. The other is that the Romans held the festival named Lupercalia on February 14 in ancient. They prayed for protection from wolves and women prayed for fecundity. It is said that festival in Rome was become Valentine’s Day of today being connected to Britain. 

  In these days, chocolate is used by intermediate that give love on Valentine’s Day becouse chocolate is sweet. However, it is the trend that prepare only own individual gift except chocolate recently.


So seductive movie

I saw a movie few months ago. I have wanted to see that movie when I was an elementary school student, because when I saw it’s poster at very first time, it was striking even I was too young to feel how sexy is.

 So, I saw that. It was so seductive movie that named ‘the lovers’;. Have you ever heard about it? The story is quite simple. A chinese man loves a french girl, but they couldn’t lasts their realationship at the end of their lives. I don’ know why I attractied, but I want to love someone deeply even I know that it is an unattainable desire like the actors in this movie.


What caused you to do something you are not proud of?

It has proven that everyone has a weak point even they couldn’t notice. So, what makes me feel that I’m not a good person? There are three types of reasons why I think like that.

 First, people are not judged by their capability. If they don’t have the proper ability that could carry on their tasks, and couldn’t show their ability that they can afford suitably, they would be lossers and lost their temper at all. So, they tend to be perfect.

 Second, for me, apperance is quite an important reason to live in a intense sosiety. I think it’s not only my case but also everyone’s. I know judjing someone by his appearance is ridiculous, but it couldn’t be ignored, and social current makes me think like that! It’s dangerous. It may cause people to get plasic surgery. People who get ‘natural good looking’ thank god for giving you such a fantastic faces and body! You have been chosen.

 Third, I do something that I’m not proud of because of my boring life. Even everyone lives the same way, but I get bored easily. I’m sick and tired of doing the same things. Sometimes I wish I could live in counterclockwise.

 As I mentioned above, people are judged by their circumstance. That means, you can change your own circumstance! So, if you want you be proud of yourself, you should make and effort constantly!