Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

Don’t Believe Muscle.

 I heard Korean famous singer Kim Jong-gook joined the military yesterday. But  the fact that he is joining as a civil service man puzzelde almost all people and me. Because he has shown his gorgeous muscle to us and he is well knowned for exercising in fitness clubs. And he has shown his physical strength in many variety shows, for example Dream Team.And His popularity was attributed to such his appearance. I am really disapointed.I’d liked him, his song and his personality. It is said that he’ll be a civil service man due to a waist disk.And his pysical examination for the army was conducted in 1996. Anyway in Korea things relating to military are very sensitve to all.


Sleepless in seattle

 I take an one class, “Understanding English Language  through films” .And now I learn the movie”Sleepless in seattle” I guess all of you know the movie. In my opinion the theme of the movie is DESTINY. Annie( Mag Rion)at first didn’t believe destiny.Destiny’s just something we’ve invented because we can’t stand  the fact that evrything that happens is in acidental.that’s why people make destiy and rgard something as destiny. But her mother said to her that it’s a magic.  Annie is attractive to some guy who happened to know on the radio.But she even doesn’t know about him at all.Furthermore,she has a great boyfriend -although he hasn’t a sense of humor. Do you believe DESTINY? Or do you think it just  things happen in accidental?


Drinking can cause many negative effects that could ruin your life.

   Alcohol can cause many negative effects that could ruin your life. When we feel depressed or can’t get sleep easily, we tend to depede on alcohol. If you keep depeding on Alcohol consistantly, you can be an alcohol addictive. And frequent drinking is time and money waisting. Beacause it’s not helpful for your body. Third, After we drink so much, we feel headahe and sick. That is very agonizing. Lastly, drunken driving is a social problem in Korea. Druken driving is the worst thing of the other negative effects. Because it can do harm to other people. Drinking interferes ratinal judgement so you can easily do  mistakes. And the mistake might ruin your life.


Hi~

I,ve just registered. actually I registered earlier, but I had a mistake. I registered another blog. so when I would write something, I didn’t be permitted.

As I always feel, it is hard to write in English. I think it is necessary to read many books. Sure other skills are also important. I guess in this class we’ll get very useful and helpful ways to write and it  could help write somethig in Korean too!