Monday~!
Today is Monday! It’s very refresh to me. What makes me think like that? Listen how I can analyze.
First, Monday means a start. Even though I had hard time last several days, we could have a new start. We should not that the unpleasant and ominous past affects the present.
Secondly, I’m in a state that blows off my stress because we took a rest without any tension. We were in comfort during the weekend. Though we had to do some work, we could do that a time that isn’t set. The work isn’t right faced problem.
Thirdly, we think of this week and the future.
We make a plan about what we have to do and how we lead our days such as we’ll do our best. So we have guides that we follow. We can’t help being full of hopes.
Let’s start crisp Monday together~
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I’m really happy to hear of you. It’s so sad that you looked like very hard and tired when I saw you a few days ago. Yes!! That’s your own self. Go for it!!
i don’t like monday because i have to come out of happy weekends. haha
Well, I was relieved to read that too, at the time, because you did seem like you were pretty tired a few weeks ago, KyoungHwa.
I like this, but I think these points could easily fit into a single paragraph. If you want to have them all as different paragraphs, that’s okay, too, but you know what it requires? You need to add more information to each point… examples, maybe, or more explanation…
Finally, I think the last paragraph somehow got chopped in half. The single line beginning “Thirdly” and the line after it belong in the same paragraph, don’t they?
As an exercise to improve your writing, please expand this post into a longer “short essay” by adding information and examples to each paragraph. Trust me, you can do it!