cheesecake
My sister loves making bread and cakes,sometimes cookies and chocholate. Thanks to her hobby, I am getting weight ,but anyhow I like her bread and cakes. she can make lots of bread and cakes such as sesame bread,croissant, muffin,strawberry Tart and so on. Wow, It sounds delicious! My favourite is her cheesecake. I can taste creame cheese of two-thirds and biscuit on the bottom.I want to know how to make these things. I am gonna ask her recipe now!
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Your sister makes cheesecake?
Tell me, does she need a new friend? Hahaha.
Actually, wait. I don’t need to be eating more cheesecake.
Please be careful with punctuation. When you write a comma, put it right after the word it follows, and then use a space, like I’m doing in this sentence. Don’t do like this ,or like this,because it doesn’t look right.
The other thing: try to avoid slang in your posts — “gonna” is slang for “going to”, right? — and try to be careful about spelling. There are a couple of spelling errors in this post. See if you can find them and correct them!