it was hard time to work in Airport for the last week.
it was daily in march 28th.i suddenly was going to work in ICN-Airport.a friend of mine told me that the working hour is dependens on when the guest arrive. there is a conference ” Women for Peace” in ** Hotel. it estimated that a number of guests come to korean to take part in conference. so before taking a part in conference, the mission is to pick up guests in front of each gate. and take guests to the hotel safely by limousine. It was easy. i took a message late night. they said. first guest would arrive in ICN at 6:00 am. so now i have to wake up before 4 o’clock. i set an alarm clock at 4 but I woke up at 5 so i took a shower ASAP and put on suit and get to Airport. it ’s five thirty and i called the taxi and told driver to go to ICN Airport ASAP. the taxi run toward Airport with violence traffic of regulation. the driver brought me to the ICN airport . it was six o’clock. and I went down first floor for Arrival and go to the time schedule and checked the flight. fortunetly, Flight which took guest from L.A will arrive at six thirty. so I took a breath. Guest was to come out gate B. i will expect to see the guest in gate B with holding a sign board 30m later, Guest who worn a suit and come closer to me. after eye contact each other. she made me smile.and I gave her message. and then i greet each other and check her name. and i took her to the Limousine bus stop. and she took a limousine I waved farewell , smiling at her till the bus had gone. after having gone, i called office of hotel and i had a breakfast . it was really hard time but it realy please to meet Guest without any happens. it was really good job individually.
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Jeong Hun,
Wow, it sounds tough! I am glad I don’t have your job.
Jeong Hun, I want to stress to you the importance of crafting your writing. What I mean is, I don’t want you to worry about telling me an interesting story, or even the whole story! I would be happier if you wrote something shorter, and simpler, but with more care and attention to your sentences. There is a time for writing a lot, and that time is during your free-writing and other preparations. But when you are writing a paragraph to show other people, choose only the most important details and then, instead of writing the whole thing at one time, write a sentence for each point that you want to include in your paragraph. After you have all of your sentences, THEN you can think about maybe combining some sentences to make compound sentences, adding more details, and so on.
Here’s something I want you to write in your writing checklist:
As an exercise for your writing improvement, re-read the above paragraph out loud, and copy it out into your notebook sentence by sentence. I want you to read each sentence individually and find all the errors in each one. Do it slowly and carefully.
A few hints: watch your tense, capitalization, and compound sentences. (make sure they are linked by a conjunction). Also look out for sentence fragments, especially sentences where there is no active verb.
Also: the title was very long for this paragraph. Shorter titles are much better. How about something shorter like, “What a Tough Job!” or “A Hard Day’s Work” or something like that? Try make up your own shorter title.
I have just checked the comment now. when i am getting more more writing on blog. there are a lot of errors and problem what i am writing. always prof. said practice practice. I think it is the best way, but it is getting boring. i would like Prof to say “thank you” I am striving to improve my writing skills to be a good writer.