Dog meat culture
Dog meat has developed in the Korea from ancient times. It is characteristic culture heritage of Korea and wisdom of Korean ancestors. There are several historical reasons that. Summer is very hot in Korea; so, a colory is consumed rapidly. To avoid this problem, people had to eat meat. At that time, cattles and pigs were important means of living to Korean who had forming in their life. Therefore they used a dog which often could see in thier surroudings. In the other country, for example, Nomadic people who used dogs to breeding a sheep could eat enough horse, cattle, and sheep so on. Instead, they couldn’t eat dogs. Nomadic age was over, and westerners began to raise a dog as pet. So, they mat not understand dog meat culture. ; but, they have not a right that dog meat culture is clearly cruelty to dogs. They must understand culture relative. I’ve never eaten dog meat. Even so, I don’t think that dog meat culture is low culture. It is one of our culture. Thus, I desire that if you were human of globalization age, you admit our eating culture. It is that rightful mission and essential grounding.
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Yoon Jung,
You might be surprised to know that I actually have had dog soup before, many times. Personally, I don’t object to people eating dog meat, but I think some of the ways the dogs are slaughtered are pretty scary… just like the way some chickens and cows and other animals are treated and slaughtered in agriculture. So it’s interesting to see your views on this…
Anyway, I have a couple of questions:
I ask these questions because I am wondering if you did any research before you wrote this paragraph. It’s one thing to claim that “common knowledge” is true in conversation; it’s quite another if you write it down as a truth. If you state something is true in writing, you really should check whether it’s true or not. This is important because presenting popular ideas as truth, when they might not be facts, hurts your argument.
There’s a lot more we could talk about but I’ll wait till we get to how to do argumentation in writing before I’ll bring it up.
As for your writing itself: Be careful: from your first sentence, there’s a problem about being clear what you’re talking about. You wrote,
This sounds kind of strange, because you’re not actually talking about dog meat. Dog meat only lasts a week or two, and then it’s not edible. You’re talking about something else — about the practice of eating dog meat, or the custom of eating dogs, or even just something simple like dog-eating, or something like that. This might not be obvious right away, but think about it and I think it’ll make sense. What I’m saying is that you need to be very specific about which verb and which subject go together.
“Dog meat culture” also sounds a little strange, and I think again it’s because Korean culture is not a “dog meat culture” but “a culture of dog-eating” (or, at least, it is in part “a culture of dog meat-eating”).
Finally — check spelling! There are a few words spelled incorrectly here!
I was surprised that is your comment. I appreciate. Frankly, I don’t know exactly. But, I like it usually. A few ago,I saw some article about a culture of dog-eating and I wrote about this article. I’ll check your pointing. And then, I’ll question if I don’t understand. Thank you,sir!!^^