- reinforce my opinion - 

1. audience: teenager 

You are growing up. So, in the midst, you can do many things to build up your body and spirit. What do you want to do? What will you do? Although television has many good points and it is very important means, television will bad affect on your life. From now, you must reduce time for watching television. And then, first, go out with your friend or romp about on the playground. You can not only promote your health, but also can learn about method of conversation what you have to find certainly. Second, read book as much as possible. Reading book will give some assistance that is helpful to your ability to concentrate and this habit even will be of help your grade. Third, incease the time with your parents. To become a great adult, you must also take right judgment what really need to you. Trough your parents, you can gain this ability.

I suggest. Do something that can help you!! Instead of watching television!! If you accept my suggetion, you’ll get a chance that become cool!  

2. audience: parents

Although television has many good points, it will bad affect on your child. Turn off television!! And then, increase time with your child. Your child doesn’t know whether right or wrong. He/She must take right judgment. They can’t think that in imprudence advertisements and programs. So, ask for news about their life and help them and give some advice. No one can these roles for your child. Television can’t also it. Person who can it is only you. 

- refocus - 

3. audience: parents

Your child is affected by television. It gives a short attention span. People who grew up reading books or engaged in outdoor activities can concentrate for a long time. If your child have lots of time for watch television, they also will doesn’t get good grade in their class. In addition, television is the exposure to advertising. So, they get indiscretion information through it. Your child want to buy some products of the latest fashion, and then they will abondon it easily. Also, television effects on health of your child. Children can have excellent physical condition through interation with their friends or surrounding. Children who are in the room continuously have weaker systems and much higher chance of getting sick. Although television has many good points, it will bad affect on your child. If you want to have normal child, what can you do for he/she?