Myeong-Dong
I went to go in Myeong-Dong with my friend. In spite of yellow sand,there were many people in Myeong-Dong. My friend and I stay in starbucks, because of many people and yellow sand. But some people with mask wandered on the street. and many foreigners visited it, because it has many sights and food stores. Specially, there were many japanese and chinese. I think it insufficients a sightseeing commodity and special events for foreigners. Now a sightseeing commodity is almost entertainer picture. Of course, it can become sufficient profit. But in long term aspect, it can not become a plenary commodity. Threfore, we need to change tour industry. If surrounding changes more special and fascinating, foreigner’s number will increase more and more. I hope that our tour industry developes more than now.
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Joo Young!
Wow, you’re thinking about international tourism in Korea? That’s an interesting and complex topic! I’d be very interested in reading more about that.
I wonder if 믕�?� is the word you intended to write? Meung = 믕. Do you mean Myeongdong? (명�?�? It can also be spelled Myungdong.)
There are a couple of proper names for companies and countries that are not capitalized here. I counted three. Try find them and correct them!
Be careful when you are writing long words, to make sure you use them in the correct way. For example, in this sentence, it looks like the word “insufficient” is being used as a verb, but the problem is, “insufficient” isn’t a verb! It’s an adjective, and there is an adverb form (insufficiently, but there’s no verb form. We say, “I think there are insufficient attractions for sightseeing…” but the verb we use would be “is”.
Now a sightseeing commodity is almost entertainer picture.
Do you mean this is the only sightseeing commodity? In that case, you should note that. I think I told the class before, “almost” usually doesn’t get used alone. “Almost nothing but pictures of entertainers” is a clearer way of saying what I think you mean.
What does “plenary commodity” mean? Is there a simpler, clearer way to say this?