The way to spend happy life
Everything is depend on our thinking and attitude toward something happens. Before that, I sometimes heard that saying to my family and some seniors, but It goes in an ear out the other at that time. These days I can feel deeply by living as a senior in my university. There are a few happening to me.
I used to go to the English institute during last winter vacation. I enjoyed addressing my opinion to my native teacher and classmates in English, so I’m able to build up a little confidence. After starting this term in university I became a pre-graduate student. I think the name gives a strong responsibility and great burden to me. I lost my confidence more and more due to several major classes that is requested natural speaking in English. One of the reasons is that there are smart students who speak English fluently in class, so it seems to be lose my confidence. However, I already know that some confidence are more important than real ability. Also, the each steps to grow up speaking skills has a strong meaning to learn a English language.
There is another example to explain the top sentence of this essay. taht is some worries whether I cna get a job what I want to do or not. Some anxiety toward finding a job doesn’t give help to me. These is a famous phase in the book ‘ An alchemist ’ by Paulo Coelho. ”When you desire earnestly to your goal, the universe gives a hand sincerely.” Do my best and passion for my goal during preparing for graduation as well as finding a job is enough. If I persevere in my efforts with possitive thinking, God bless me. of course there is no any regret, so everthing depends on out thinking and attitude.
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Nami,
I really relate to your worries. I’ve been in a similar position myself. Coelho’s sort of right: sometimes when you have a lot of passion for something, and you really want something, you can achieve it. It helps to have realistic goals, of course! And of course he also means that if you really, earnestly desire something, you will work hard to achieve it. Then things will seem to begin to fall into place for you because of your efforts. By the way, you used the quote wonderfully. Good job!
Now, for your paragraph: I want you to pay VERY close attention when you are writing, to whether you’re writing about the present, the past, or the future.
In your first paragraph, there are spots where I think you’ve writing about the past, (ie. “Before that…”) but you use present tense (“goes in one ear…”). Again, at the end, it looks like you’re writing about a future with the conditional, “If I persevere in my efforts…”, but you finish the sentence with simple present, “God bless[es] me.”
What I think you mean in these sentences, is this:
Before, I sometimes heard that saying
tofrom my family and some seniors, butItitgoeswent inanone ear and out the other at that time.If I persevere in my efforts with
possitivepositive thinking, God will bless me.Please check all your other sentences in this post to see if the verbs are using the tense you mean in the sentence.