He was born in 1809. He was a pesident of America.
He was a normal person. Forexample, he had ant school career and background. And he was a strong ruler. For example, he railed northen Democracy, and built the Republican Paty. He also good person. For example, he wished to abolish Negro slavery, so he lead to won the Civil War.
Therefore, America people love him
Eunsoo, I read your essay. But, I think it is a bit hard to understand. Is being good person related to leading to win the Civil War? I’m not sure, but being good will be more simmilar to a nice charateristic of person. And, you know, the topic sentence doesn’t really seem to fit the essay. Because it’s about Lincoln’s result or work, a topic sentence should be representative to the contents, I think. I hope your essay gets better.