You should not drink alcohol because drinking can cause serious problems. You probably think people who drink a lot seem to be cool, but they are killing themselves. When you go to a college or get a job, it’s inevitable for you to drink at least once in a while for your social life. However, You should not blame anyone for your behavior of drinking often. You should control yourself because you are an adult.
Do you have any ideas how important your liver is? If your liver gets sick it will cause various diseases such as a cancer, and you already know a lot of people are dying because of that. You can maintain your health just by driking little. You should not appreciate the blessing of health until you lose it. Drinking can cause another somthing awful. If you drink and drive, you are commiting a suiside. It doen’t matter how much you drink. Thesedays many poeple have a hectic lfe. Most of them go to school or go to work. Some people do both of them for their valuable lives. They have somthing in common. They are tired and exhasueted with too much work. Here is an example of a story. A mas is driving a car. A picture of his precious daughter is smiling at him on the front window. He cannot wait to see her and her mom tonight because he got promoted. An hour ago, his coworkers celebrated his promotion with a couple of bottles of beers. He rejected the offer of drinking at first because he brought his car today, but his friends didn’t let him go home without a party. It was a long day. Now, he dreams of buying a new house and living happily ever after with his family. Then, somthing horrible happened. It turned out he was too tired to drive in soberness after drinking. This kind of accident can happen to you too. You are not an exception.
Therefore, you should be careful of your behavior when you drink after graduation. You can enjoy drinking with a proper amount of alcohol in a suitable situation because you are smart enough to be aware of them. Don’t forget to think of you as an adult who can control yourself wisely.
Have you heard about MADD? It is a nonprofit organization for protecring drunk drivers. You remind me of its ads!
What I want to comment on your post is I can get your point of view,but I’m somewhat confused the way you keep your story continuing in the main part. In the beggining of that part you mentioned liver problem then wrote another story out of nowhere.
I suggest you have lubricant to make your story smoothe.
Thank you for advising me! I should work on making my story smoother but why don’t you read my story again? I said “drinking can cause another something awful”and that would be the point of begining the other story which is drinking driving. I should have written more about liver damage to avoid confusing readers.