Rice needs water and sunshine to grow

change: Rise is a kind of crops . When it grow , It nees many of things ,some water , proper sunshine ,  manure and so on. The weather of korea is good for growing rice ,because It clear a four season .  But the most  impotant thing to grow well is  famer’love  .

2 thoughts on “Rice needs water and sunshine to grow”

  1. Eunsoo, I want to ask you one thing. Your sentence, ‘ because It clear a four season’. Where is a verb? How about ‘because it has clear four seasons.’? It might be better.

  2. Your paragraph is very good. You use an appropriate expression. But I think you make some mistake about spelling.
    1) Rise – Rice
    2) First sentence : It – it ; a small letter
    3) nees – needs : verb
    4) a four season – the four seasons

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