Recently. consumtion of rice has been decresing. There could be many reasons brought this reselt, but one thing is that there is no improvement on rice. While bread have considerable kinds of chice and favor, the food which is made by rice can be counted in ine hand. The people who are working on agricultaral side and also cusine side should do some act over bread which is made of wheat.
Above all. they need to develope many dishes from rice. This time is completly different from 60s and 70s when people just wanted to eat rice to be full. They did not much care on the taste of rice. They were just happy to eat rice. However, thesedays, people changed. They want to eat more speacail and healthy food. Therefore, the people who anticipating in business of food and cultivation. They have to follow the flow of fashion and concept of what most people want to ear with rice. So I want them to be more conpetitive for at least . keeping up with the Jhones.
Moreover, we need to think that rice is our staple food, so we need to preserve and make it better in flavor and quality as well. At this case, farmers should be more wise and keep their eyes wide open to make the condition of rice better. people are more getting into their health problem. So pageants need to try and ally with high thechnology to improve the rice. It has been proved that eating rice is much better than bread in diet. In this respect, the people who are related with rice should be aggresive and cutting -edged.
In conclusion, rice is imprtant in our life as Korean, so we need to love more it. Therefore, rice should change its out dated fashion and it should approach and capture Korean’s mind again as fully versatile and likable figure.
Some grammar is complicated a litte. I know you just understood mistake you did before . but be careful spell.
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Thanks for commenting that point! I also see that I made some mistakes in spelling such as consumtion. I ommited P!!