Elementary Composition – Night

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I’m home

Recently, I played like insane. I didn’t know what I’m doing,and what I had to do, just play, so I was sick. The fever caused my body to ache,so I took some tablets,but it made me getting worse, because it is made up of Amoxicillin. I think it is related to penicillin. I have an allergy to penicillin, so I scratched an itchy place, and I couldn’t go MT. Now I’m recovered, and this lesson sink into my mind. ㅡㅡ;


Living in a competitive world

Personally, I believe that everyone has to competition during their whole life,so there are many competition between many things. I don’t think there is perfect equalibrium.

 For example, people wear diamond, because they want to look better than other people. They want to show their ability to pay by showing off their diamonds. Let me give you another example. Because Malaria spreads quickly, people sometimes die unless they couldn’t control the speed of spreads Malaria.

 It’s not only human being’s case. What about tigers? Tiger attacks people, because they are afraid of the risk of attack that people might attack them first even the tighers don’t know whether tigers feel fear or not.  I think it is a kind of compatition,too. It is related to confidence.

 Then, who don’t feel any fear or competition? It’s a lion,because it’s a kink of animal, so they don’t have to competitive with other animals! So to speak, guys, be the first, because the weak are the prey of the strong.

 

p.s. I think it is a ‘story’ by using cause and effect.


A stingy person

I talked with so hee about her father. He doesn’t buy meal outside, only eats at home,and always buys the cheapest food even it’s not fresh. He is like a housewife. Second, he never gives her pocketmoney,so she always get it from her mom. Third, he never go to the theater. He always wait movies until it comes out in TV. I don’t think he is stingy, just he is a prudent housekeeper,because I know how hard living in a tough nowadays without money.


An anusual person

I interviewed with yu mi about her friend. I just call him ‘k’ because it’s a private matter. First, he never bought new clothes and shoes ever her seen him. That means, he always wears same clothes and shoes.He wears it over and over. Second, he never changes his hair. I thought he might be satisfied with his hair,or he was afraid of try to change his hair. Lastly, he spend money for other people, but he doesn’t like spend money for himself. After the interview, I thought that he is not an anusual person. I guessed he is generous and kind.


Guess who

My partner is wearing brown pants that lengh is far to middle of ankle,and wears a t-shirt which has sparkle in front of it,also it was banded on waist. She wears sneakers which is made by dkny. I also observed her face. She is wearing glasses that has no frame around it,and she has no earing on her ear. Actually, her eyebrow is well made like wings of segul.She has cute lip and doesn’t wear a make up on her face,and has clean and short nail. Lastly, she has tiny dot on her neck. I think she looks young than her real age. She was pretty cute.


Where am I?

This place is located in my aprtment. Sometimes I go there to refresh myself by seeing a clear sky when I feel gloomy. There are few fans, and some unknown structures in there. Even there is a garden! It’s calm so people barely come to there. Only fans are in motion like a ghost in tomb. When I’m there, I feel like I could reach to the sky if I stretch my arm to the sky, and I also attemted to jump down. Actually, people sometimes commit suicide in there ,so it should be locked always.


At a zoo

I went to a zoo this weekend with my girl friend. People in the zoo were wearing diamonds. First, girl friend  and  I went to a cave of tigers. People were afraid of tigers because they knew tigers attack people. My girl friend and I were afraid of tigers too. At that moment we saw something strange inside the cave. We looked at it carefully,and we could recognize what it was. That was a lion. Lions and tigers were living in a same cave. We were very surprised. In the safari bus we saw a mosquito. Mosquito can cause malaria.Malaria is very dangerous. Because malalria spreads easily. So I killed that mosquito, and we had a nice time at the zoo


An unusual person

Yu-mi is a very unusual person I know. She likes listening to music. But it’s not similar to other people. She even listens to music even when she is sleeping! She feels uncomfortable if she is not listening to music. Actually, I do too. I think she is unusual. 


Guess who..?

 Can you guess who this is? This person is a member of our class. He is one of my best friend in our class. He has a pretty black colored face. Brown can be the right color. He always carries a black bag to class. He likes wearing a purple color shirts. And this can be the most important hint!! His face looks like a famouse Korean movie star Joo Jin-mo. He is very proud of this fact. But unfortunately he doesn’t have a girl friend. He is very quiet ,and doesn’t like to talk much. Can you know who this is? 

 


My trip to South Africa

 I went to the South Africa as a volunteer work last year. At that time I went to there as a medical volunteer service because malaria spread out around Africa. Many Africa country desperately needed medical aid from the other country. South Africa is one of biggest diamond manufacture country. So many people wear diamonds because the diamond is in plentiful supply. But diamond is only available to the rich people, and most of poor people cannot get normal medical treatment. South Africa is really beautiful county. It’s nature environment and architecture style is really beautiful and gorgeous. There are also many wild animals like tiger, lion, hippopotamus, zebra It is really miraculous and beautiful. But it is sometimes dangerous because the tiger attack people.


I hate her.

One of my friends is very luxurious , because she like self – display.  Because she is also selfish, she pay no attention to other people´s feelings. I don’t like her, so I avoid her.


It happened at a party place.

A few days ago, I attended a party. Many people was wearing diamonds, because they wanted to show off their riches. After almost people arrived, animals’ show started. A few minutes after, a tiger attacks people suddenly. Because a tiger was very sick and angry. A tiger has suffered from malaria. (Malaria is very dangerous, because malaria spreads easily) Anyway, people wanted to control this situation. But they failed, because other animal started attack to people. That was a lion. After all, that party was messed.


An Unusual Person

Mee Ji’s friend is very unusual women. She likes go to theater and restraund by oneself. Almost women never go to theater and restaraunt by oneself because they feel loneliness and shamed.  She think it’s a matter of course. I think she is different and unusual person.


I like go to zoo

Yesterday, I went to zoo with friends. My friend wear diamond, so I was the envy of the she’e shiny diamond. Diamonds are beautiful so people likes wear it. I saw many animals. Also, I saw tigers. I felt fear because tiger attacks people. People gather about  a dreeder because he bring qute anmal. It’s a baby lion. Yesterday was very hot weather. There are many mosquito in the zoo. malaria spreads easily,so people have to take a medicine for preventing it.


Guess who

She has dark brown and wave hair. Her face is clean and white. She looks so younger than other women sho has same age. She has big and black eyes. She has small spot on the left eye. Her hands are very small and put a ring on the second finger. She looks so qute because she’e smile looks like a baby. 


highschool

Maybe I will go to my highshcool afternoon. It’s long time to see my friends. In high school my club was science club. I am 6th. In this year 10th is freshman. It’ amazing. While I was speading my life in university, I forgot my memories in highschool. It was special, funny, happy really. Sometimes I wanna go back to highschool but it can’t. Later I should visit school to see my teacher. i miss them.


My Literature Teacher

My leterature teacher is very kindness. When I took in her class, I felt she is amiable people, because she always say kindly and softly other. A few days ago, I didn’t present a mitterm-report. But, she said with smile, “Don’t care. That isn’t easy for you. So far as you can, do your best! Cheer up!^^”  Oh~ you are a sincerely angel!! Because she is very humaneness, I’m impressed by her. If I’m her, maybe I will be justly angry about that. But, she understood me who made excuses, so I think she is liked by many people, especialy students.


My stingy friend

My friend is really stingy. He never bring more than 3000won in his money becaues he can refrain himself from wasting money by doing that way. He cannot help saving his money by adjusting his consumption. For example, he always eat lunch which is less than 2000won, and he usually ask his classmate to buy him something to eat. If he has not any money, he usually bear hunger until he come back his home. Then he eat something like ramyeon. Whenever he eager to drink alcohol, he usually drink it in hishouse because he want to save his money. The 1 bottle of soju cost more than 3000won in pub, but it cost only 900 won in supermarket. He usually drink so-ju with the kimchi stew or ramyeon in his house. He said it is chiefest way to drink.


My Advanture

 I was tired of my daily routines. So I decided to go to jungle for adventure because my favorite animation was the Jungle Book in my childhood. I expected definitely I could feel alive there. I think what I have to do before departure is only immunization against Malaria Because Malaria spreads easily there. My friend said to me that tiger attacks people there so you might be in dager. But my mind wasn’t changed, and said that I would be okay.I went to the jungle by my ship. As soon as I got there I looked for something to eat. I found one fruit. It looked like Melon, but tasted not good. I met some aborigines, and to my surprise they’re wearing diamond. Finding me they threatened me. I was really scared. I had even a thin pole. I took out a cigarette lighter senselessly. When they just rushed in me, I lighted it up. Then suddenly they really was surprised. They kneeled to me and gave me their diamond. So I gave my cigarette lighter to them. I left there and went to another, on my way I found something wounded.I looked it more closely.It was a lion,but It is a baby. I cured its wound. I decided to go back home. I brought the diamond which they give me to my country,and now I am a millionaire.


I usually go to zoo.

Because I love to see many animals, I usually go to zoo. Once I go there, I sometimes take a picture with a memorable animal. It is a lion. Even though  it is a savage animal, I am Ok because of a cub. Whenever I went a Safari in Young-in, I alway thought If tigers attact people, What am I doing? Even imagination, so deadful. If you go to zoo, there are watchful things.

firstly, Some people came here  with accessories. Especially, those who wear diamonds must be careful for approaching animals. Because they have many curiosity about people’accessories, some kinds of brilliant animals were trained by their zoo keeper often steal high price things.

Secondly, because many animals live there, a lot of mosquito also exist. Many people as well as  animals were threaten by mosquito. If people and animals are bitten by mosquito, there are chance of bad dieases. Specially,Because Malaria speards easily, it is very dangerous.

In conclusion, If you go to zoo, You must be careful of  savage beast, brilliant anmials, mosquito.


I want to live there.

When i served in the military, I was there. The place is famous for beautiful a scene. Mountain is very grand. Especially. Whenever I saw their Rock in Mountain, I was awed by the majesty of the mountain. Food of the place is well-known about delicious buckwheat noodles, marin products. Unlike Seoul, because air was very fresh, so I always felt refreshed. Many people usually visit their rest. Sea also is very famous. There are a lot of see bath beach. From Jun to September, most people came here.


Through TIME-MACHINE,

In a laboratory, I began to explore in the time by the TIME-MACHINE that made scientists. In ancient, I was walking with friends in Africa. When we went to a shabby village, the native watched us and attacted. But, at once, we could join them. While we were living with them together, they made us see many things. For example, it’s a lion. A lion was caught in a fence that people made. Because a lion and tiger attacts people, they couldn’t be caught. Second, they had treasure mines. They often went there and took treasures, so we could see people wear diamonds. One day, the mosquito attacted to the village, so Malaria spreads easily and quickly. Many piople in the village died. We couldn’t live there any longer, because we could be infected with Malaria. So, we hurry back in the laboratorty by rode the TIME-MACHINE. What a  scary there was!


2006 World Cup

Korean coach Dick Advocat named a final squad for next month’s World Cup in Germany.It’s too bad that Cha,Doo-Ri was dropped. He plays for the Bundesliga,and her father also played for the Bundesliga and is now very famous coach and sports caster.The majority of Koreans expect that our team would show nice games because our team has improved. For exampl, our team we have some players who play in Europe and experienced big match last 2002 korea and Japan Word Cup. I hope that we all enjoy this upcoming international festival. 


My friend is …

When I was in middle school, I could meet a lot of friends. I hope to introduce one of my friends who met in middle school, because he is really good. My friend is very kind, so most of people like him. Whenever I had hard time, he would help me, and he never showed me hesitation. When I joined a band of bad boys in high school, he waited me all-night to meet me. Because he is ready to the Higher Civil Service Examination, he should study hard, but he treated that I am the apple of his eye. I always thank for him as well as help if he need me to help.


How hard~

In this library there are some people who study hard. Even though it is hard to study because of sleep, they do it so well. I am in here too, but I don’t study my study efficiently. I want to study as much as I can, but I can’t, because I am so sad. Nowadays, I should ready to go UK, and it is really busy, so I can’t perform others. I should make my schedule well to spend my time well.

 


A stingy person I know

I’ll introduce a friend of mine who is very stingy. I won’t tell his name. He likes to drink so-ju, but he never pays money. At first all of our friends thought that maybe he had no money for a while, but it wasn’t it!! He never paid money for six months. Our friends made a decision not to call that friend whenever we drink so-ju. Now, he joined the military service so we can’t see his face.


My Trip in Africa

When I visited Africa 30 years ago, the whole continent was just a primitive nature itself. I was very surprised because African children played with diamonds. People didn’t wear diamonds because they didn’t even know how diamonds were valuable. Plus, a preventive injection wasn’t popular, so Malaria spread easily. What was worse, there were a lot of wild animals everywhere. I heard tigers attacked people many times, so I was very careful to prevent the horrible situation. However, it really happened. One day I was sleeping at night on my own with a window open. Suddenly I felt something heavy and violent on me. I soon realized it wasn’t a tiger. The snarling sound was different from tiger’s because it was a lion! I fought with it desperately for my life. I stabbed the lion in the throat and the back with a dagger. When I recovered consciousness I was covered all over with wounds in a hospital.


My Most Loving Place

This is a place I like the most. From the door there is a black bookshelf, a black and white desk, and a blue chair. The bookshelf is on the right corner touching the two walls and facing the door. The long side of the desk touches the right side wall of the door. The chair lies near the desk. The left side of the desk touches the middle of the shelf. There is a white bed on the opposite side of the desk. It is on the other corner also touching the two walls. The long side of the bed touches the left side wall of the door. Pink bed sheets and two pink pillows are on the bed. A built-in wardrobe is on the same wall of the door facing the bed. There is a window between the shelf and the bed. The door, the window frame, and the wardrobe is all white. The walls are ivory, and the floor is brown.


Have You Ever Been to This Place?

This is a place that I often visit with my friends. It is small and surrounded by big glass windows on two sides. There are two long tables and some stools along the two glass windows. There are some tables and chairs in the middle of the shop, and the counter is opposite to the door. On the right of the door there are pink shelves to display many different kinds of donuts. Menu board is hung on the top of the wall beyond the counter, and a fridge is on the left of the counter. The whole shop is decorated with colorful tiles.


My Brother

I have an older brother. I feel him like my second parent because he always teaches me what good and bad things are. Since the very first of my life I have got a lot of help from him whenever I needed, so I can’t imagine my life without him. Besides, he takes the initiative in everything to give me good examples. Because he always tries to lead me to a good way in my life, not only do I love him but also do I pay my respect to him.