The Rice cake is Koreans treditional food. Rice cake is made of rice that are Korean’s mais food. There are many kinds of Rice cake. They eat Songpeon at Chooseok that is national holiday. And they eat rice cake soup at New years day. Rice cake treated bigoted thing. But nowadays many people develop rice cake. So rice cake is more beautiful and havig more varity teasts.
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Hi~ I read your essay. I think your writing has some problems. And, I hope to say.
[The Rice cake is Koreans treditional food. Rice cake is made of rice that are Korean’s mais food. There are many kinds of Rice cake. ]
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A rice cake is including Korean traditional food. It is made of rice that has been a main food in Korea. And there are many kinds of rice cakes.
In addition, you missed to use several articles and plural nouns on your essay. I hope you improve your english and have a nice day.