Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

Alcohl is present of God

What do you think the the most blessed thing is in the world? It is alcohl. There are many good points of alcohl. The first is relaxation. When is the most relaxative time you have experienced? Just before sleeping? No, it is when you are drunken. If you are nervous or want to feel easy, just drink ancohl. You could be more comportable than any other times.

The second is decreasing stress. There are hundreds of things that make us stressful in modern life. How could we get rid of it without alcohl? Drinking alcohl is The best and easiest way. It would remove the stress without any pain. 

Lastly the best thing you can get by drinking is hilarious atmosphier! Alcohl plays an important role in making people fun. I can’t expect a party or feast without alcohl. If you want to enjoy more, drink more! Because it certainly will make you higher

 


The Homework That I Maybe Didn’t Explain Well

It seemed to me like maybe I was less clear than I thought about the homework I assigned in class, so I’m going to explain it very clearly here. If you have any questions, please leave a comment with the question and I’ll answer it. Sorry this took so long but I had to reinstall Linux on my computer. Windows was killing it.

Okay, so…

Tonight we worked on creating topic sentences for each “category” in the Mind Map/idea bubble network. You created a topic sentence for one part of the map, and started to created other sentences for each of the ideas or items in the category. For example:

There are many kinds of alcohol which are popular among Korean students.  Beer is very common, because it’s cheap. Soju is also common, especially among male students. Wine isn’t so popular, but some people enjoy it. And students with a lot of money to spare sometimes drink whiskey or other strong alcohol.

In the  example above, the topic sentence is in bold, but you don’t need to do that. (You can if you like, if you think it helps, but for now, the topic sentencewill usually be the first sentence in the paragraph, so it’s not usually necessary.)

As for your “homework”, this week you will need to make 2 blog postings, right? So, your next blog post should be the paragraph you started to work on in class, on one of the topics related to alcohol.

Your second blog post of the week should be created in a similar way, but using one of the mind-maps that you worked on before, during the last week.

(Please bear in mind that when I say “homework”, it’s not always something that gets “handed in” during class. Some homework is for a mark, and some homework helps you prepare for the big assignments that will come later on. This week’s homework is mostly the second kind… I won’t collect or mark it, but you need to do it if you want to be able to do what we will be working on next week, and the week after, and so on.)

Any questions?