Elementary Composition – Night

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An alcohol makes us lose many things.

 

As we know, we drink an alcohol to improve social relationship. However, even if we enjoy to drink, we always alert about the negative side of it.

To drink an alcohol -especially, overdrinking it- is that we lost many preciously things. First, we can waste a time. Tempting to drink it, if we do it, we don’t have a neccessary preparations. Second, we can have a various accident. When we are drunken driving, we can lost  life. Next, an alcohol make us waste much money. If we often have a chance to drink an alcohol, we can’t stand an anxiouty to drink it. So, we always spend more money than we need. Finally, we can lose self-privacy and thruth. When we drink too much, we can have some mistakes. And we always regret about our badly behavior in the next day.

Following these reasons, we must try to reduce drinking an alcohol. I think we can have a healthy life when we have to do it.


Alcohol make good atmosphere, but it sometimes get bad ending.

 We can talk that drinking is good for us. But we must think about overdrinking. Sometimes we go to a bar for icebreaking or appeasing stress. I think too many university student go to a bar a lot. And fit drinking is very good.  But after we drink over and over, problem might start. Sometimes we may talk bad language each other and it may expand fight. When we drink too much, we can’t control our body. And we may vomit. The worst case, we might fall anywhere. Have you ever seen someone on the side street? If you aren’t careful, you will become like that. Therefore alcohol can make good atmosphere, but it sometimes might get bad ending.