Elementary Composition – Night

This site is a group effort by the students in Gord's Elementary Composition evening course at Catholic University!

Diet is effort for training ability in Korea.

Last year Yo- ga diet  become popular in Korea. Someone who have opinion that diet is bad to health criti-cize  diet.

 However diet has many merit. They feel more pride as go on a diet and slim person look like more devoted than fat person.

 Specialy good looks is important thing in Korea. Good looks can merit to working intervew and love. If person have same condition, intervewer will prefers more good looks than common looks . I think effort for good looks help you became more special person.


There is flower that have a teaching like a “Halmi flower”.

There is many flower like Rose, Freesia, Tulip. How make many flower’s name ?

 One way is making name from teaching story like “Halmi flower” that mean is grandmother flower in Korea. “Halmi flower” ‘s story is that one mother who have three daughter visited her dauhgter’s home for live with them but they rejected her help. During she look for location of her daughter’s home , she was tired and felt cold. After all she pass away in road. The flower bloom that spot. This flower called “Halmi flower”. This story give theaching that we have to respect our parent.

 Sometimes flower’s name make from their trait. However name having teaching story give chance to thinking about that mean.


Do you like to drink?

So many people like to drink(even though some people like the environment of drinking), and it gives good points to them. However, it doesn’t always make good things. First of all, some people could have a big brute courage, if they were drunken. So, They caused many big problems. For example, they shouted at such a trifle as louldy as possible. Secondly, they sometimes fought one another or with foot passengers. Also, they teared down something. I don’t know why, of course they are, either. They, also, couldn’t temember what the did, so they didn’t apologize to a person who were treated. Therefore, I think we should control ourselves as we are drinking.


Drinking is not so bad!

Do you like drinking? How many times do you drink a week? In my case, I really like drinking with my friends and I drink 3-4 times a week. Some people say that drinking is bad for our health but there are some good aspects of drinking. I want to write it about it.

  First, in Korea drinking is necessary sometimes to be friends with people you do not know. While drinking with unknown person we can have a little conversation with him or she and have a chance to talk about their common interest and can become friends. Drinking is a good way to know about people. Second, it can protect heart disease. On a research, drinking a little bit a day reduces the attack of the disease. When alcohol gets into our body it destroys cholesterol and make the blood pass by more easily. Third, it’s good for mental health. If we drink alcohol it makes us to feel better and it can release our bad stress and that is why we say it’s good for our mental health. For last, in Russia for exaple, alcohol is very useful to win the cold weather. So many Russians  are drinking “Vodka” in daily life.

  But these good aspects are good only when we have enough alcohol. Too much drinking can be very bad for our health. So I want you to say that if you have a chance to drink, drink a little and do not be a drunk person in the street like our Korean people do. A little alcohol can be good for our health!!


Drinking a glass of alcohol per day is useful.

Drinking a glass of alcohol per day is useful to person’s health. That means drinking is not always bad. Once you drink alcohol, you can feel good and be comfortable. And alcohol element helps the circulation of the blood. Moreover, alcohol can dissolve fat and help activation of the body. However, if you much more drink, it’ll be can poison. And it can spoil not only you but also people around you. Therefore, drinking of proper amount is all right but you don’t have to drink much more. That is, what is most important thing we have to know exactly is not quality or price of alcohol but proper amount of alcohol like a glass in each day.