Have you ever read “butterfly” written by Jeon Kyoung-Rin? I read it by accident on Friday. It is written for women and It has a great picture every pages. There are 20, 25, 30, 33, 40 years old women’s life and love in the book. Among them, I’m touched 20 years old women’s part. Because the writer explained very well. So I sympathized. Especially, I like this sentence “Even if everything is unclear, you don’t need to be sad. Because it’s right of people who is 20 years old.” It consoled me for my anguish. Actually, I’m worrying about my future. Because I can’t predict anything about my future. But, now, I’m relieved. I realized life can’t be predicted. If anyone worry about your unsure future or want to know women’s life and love, read this book! It’s helpful.
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KyuHee,
It sounds like a good book for young women. That’s a good thing, and I hope its effect on your worries is effective for a long time. It’s better not to worry so much, when life can throw so many surprises at us. We can’t prepare for everything, about can we?
But we can be careful in our expressions. I want you to think about this sentence carefully: “There are 20, 25, 30, 33, 40 years old women’s life and love in the book.” Does it actually make sense?
Let me give you a simpler example: “There’s meat in the book.”
If you wrote that, I think you mean that, when you opened the pages of the book, you found a piece of meat in the book. This is a very weird thing to imagine! But it’s what that sentence means. There isn’t actually “meat” in the book, and there aren’t actually “20, 25, 30, 33, 40 years old women’s
lifelives and love[s]” in your book, either.There is “discussion of meat” in my book. What is there in your book? Try make a sentence that is more accurate and specific. A hint: you’ll need to talk about all those women in the plural, and there’s a better way of writing about the range of ages than to list them as you did. Give it a shot!