Infant Education
Last weekend, I saw the TV program about Infant Education. The story of the program is that everyone must look after children from all of the things. That tell us “Not only parents but also society is responsible.” There were some impressional scenes. Parents permit personal liberty of children but they are strict with a rule. And teachers made efforts to develop a child’s originality. Especially, there are teaching materials that it utilize the five sences. It was interesting. Society supports facilities of education and place of children, too. Children’s library, museum ,and so on. It was nice. But they told that the most important thing is love. Without love, child don’t grow up. This program was very nice and had a valuable information.
MyungJu,
That sounds like it was an interesting program! I think teaching materials that engage the five senses (notice the spelling!) are a very good idea.
Two small hints here: first, I understand the way that you came up with the word “impressional”; it’s a good thing that you can work with suffixes and root words in this way, but you also need to be careful. As far as I know, “impressional” isn’t the word you’re looking for. But the good news is, you chose the right root: “impress”. But you added a noun suffix (“ion” and then an adjective suffix (“al”) after that – except the adjective of “to impress” isn’t built that way. Check the dictionary under “impress” for the real adjective you’re looking for, and more important — be careful when you use words with more than a few syllables, to make sure that they’re real words!
The other tiny hint here is to be careful with your articles! You watched “the TV program about Infant Education”. Is there only one program on Infant education? Do we all know what the program is? Or is it just “a program”? It might be a good idea to review the definite and indefinite articles soon! Ask me if you don’t know exactly what I’m writing about here.
Last, a question: when you write “infant”, I wonder if you mean what I think that word means. How old are the kids you’re talking about? And can the word infant (as defined in an English-English dictionary) be used for kids of that age?
Don’t feel bad. This is quite a good piece of writing.
mistergord on April 4th, 2006 at 12:25 am