3 different conclusions (audience-parents of kids)

Uncategorized — nami on April 4, 2006 at 12:52 am

1. Reinforce your opinion

  As you know, watching television leaves  fatal effects to children. It makes them a person who has not enough patience and concentration to accomplish their tasks. Besides, they can be lose their a right judgement owing to disclose splendid and rich advertising. Another one is that the more you watch TV, the more you have trouble with your health. Except these reasons, we can find another bad effects by watching TV a lot. Thus, children should be raised a moderation of attitude to watch TV overly.

2. The Unknowns

  From now on, we searched all bad points about watching TV, but we must not fail to notice some good points about that. We’re able to gain some educational information and social hot issue or news as well as to keep the latest fashion or style. Both the bad and good things exist obviously. Let’s think about it! What is another good effects about TV?

3. Refocus

  There are several bad things about watching TV a lot. However, to be honest it’s hard to imagine our life without TV, so that inventory becomes neccessary thing in our life. Although many children give some serious effects by watching TV, the other children try to avoid harmful thing as reading books or playing sports something like that. Through these children, we can find some clear proof that’s why reading books and doing any activities is more beneficial thing than watching TV. 

  

 

Conclusion 1 about Watching TV is Bad for Children

Uncategorized — sunmyung on April 4, 2006 at 12:17 am

audience is parents of children.

Watching Television is bad for children in aspects of development of brain and health, and promotion of possessiveness about material things. Therefore, parents give their children other things to play or to do during rest of the time instead of watching TV. You have to try to find something truly different with TV. For example, the something could be reading books, listening music, painting, dancing or go hiking or fishing with family. However, the most important thing is what your children really want to do and what your children’s temperament like. It might be difficult for parents, but that is basic course for rearing  children. Let’s start talk with children for giving them new present, not a idiot box.

Assignment

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on April 3, 2006 at 10:42 pm

1,Reinforce 

   In conclusion,T.V is able to bring us to bad-effect especially for kids. It is fatal that kids are suffering from eye problem,and going laziness. And it also will break up communicating with family. This is because kids are almost concentrating on TV. It recommends that parents keep their kids refrain from watching T.V. thus, parents  take care of kids and watch educational program when they watch T.V she get a chance  to talk with family and friends.

 

2. 

  As you mentioned before. T.V may destroy communication. Because of Television, many kids are usually over weight and had mental disease. It has been major social problem. Kids are overweight, weak person. The children hood years, from birth until twelve years of age, are the most important. kids acquire reading, writing, speaking, studying everything. Positively, kids go out, enjoy game with balls then kids, and can experience a variety of study. Then T.V will be good products. kids also will develop good habits of daily

3.Refocus

Television had bad effect on kids. They watch T.V long time. Moreover, Movie and computer also had bad-effect on kids if they watch and use too much in Movie. Computer. They will be a little addictive. Movie made them violence. It is lethal that kids refrain from spending much time in Computer, if we did, we become unhealthy, both mentally and physically. However, movie always didn’t seem to be wrong. Watching a movie and T.V cans also be good for us. seeing Movie and television  reduce stress,. I finally believe that they influence their behavior of future. Then T.V never give me bad points. They depend on themselves and kids also are able to go to way of right!   

 

Conclusions.

Uncategorized — JooYoung on April 3, 2006 at 6:43 pm

 1. Other possibilities. (Audience:parents)

  For solve these bad effects, parents’ role is very important, because children relatively lack limitation and control ability. Therefore,parents have to become director. and they should make television program list with your children. For example, children themselves first choose a favorite program. and then parents allow them to see the program. But parents forbid children to see the others programs. After making program list, parents attach it television side to remember their appointment. These parents’ behavior should protect children from television harm. 

2.(Audience:teachers) 

  I think that you sufficiently know about these television bad effects. But have you ever explained about it in your class? If you didn’t it, you should realize your responsibility and you should make specific teaching method to protect children from television harm.Because children have common character that they take teachers’ teaching or advice completely and they think that teacher is the absolute being.Therefore, you are very important key to solve bad effects. and you need to carry on propagonda warning about harm.

3. Reinforce.

  Television gives children bad things. That is, televison is evil. You maybe know that bad things harm children and then children can hurt. For example, your eyes can get worse. and your health can become worse, because spend lot of time just sitting in one plce. So television doesn’t become children’s good hobby. But some people insist that through television gets several imformation. I don’t agree it. I think that imformation through television is fragmentary knowledge. In short, television is bad. 

my favorite place

Uncategorized — YoonJung on April 3, 2006 at 4:43 pm

I  have  a  favorite  place  where  I  used  to  go  to  refresh  myself  when  I  feel  gloomy  and  depressed.  That  place  is  my  uncle’s  a  huge  green  tea  plantation  in  Bo-sung.  This  green  tea  plantation  is  the  most  famous  in  Korea.  Whenever  I  go  there  fresh  leaves  of  the  green  tea  and  thick  foliage  make  my  eyes  and  heart  feel  comfortable.  Also,  I  can  taste  the  good  quality  green  tea  which  my  uncle  picked  himself.  When  I  stand  om  the  hill,  end  of  green  tea  plantation,  the  sweet  breeze  is  blow  to  me.  These  taste  really  good!!  After  I  go  to  the  Bo-sung,  I  recovered  my  composure  and  even  formed  motivation – I   can  do  anything.  Someday,  I’d  like  to  you  can  gain  your  experience  these  lots  of  pleasure  in  Bo-sung  green  tea  plantation.          

Our assingments about writing conclusion~*

Uncategorized — kyounghwa on April 3, 2006 at 12:02 pm

1. REFOCUS.

We analyzed how TV affects children in a bad way.  We discovered that even if TV is regarded as an essential, it has benefits and disbenefits.  These benefits should be decreased.  So, we did and an analysis of both sides.  Then, can you point out some demerits of computer?    

 

2. REINFORCE.Attention, folks!  Let me emphasize this.  Please don’t sit as a spectator.  When you’re doing that, your children may be being lead to unhealthy, distracted and imitative from TV.  You have to head for protecting your children.  In the limitation of making them not irritable, you should make and effort to figure it out, to be cautious of my words.

 
3. THE UNKNOWNS. / OTHE POSSIBILITIES.Above I mentioned that we need to put further consideration about TV.  Many people hardly think that we can live without TV.  They are worrying too much beforehand.  Apparently, it can not vanish.  As you know, now TV became the most important goods of exportation in our nation.  But, there is no reason we can’t assume the situation of living a life without TV.  What do you think will happen?  By imagining it, I guess we acquire more upholding about this discussion.

problems with Imported Kimchi

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on April 2, 2006 at 11:38 pm

The favorable effects of Kimchi are frequently being dealt by the media these days. Recently it was revealed that Kimchi also eases stress and prtects against skin aging.this indicates that more people in the future may eat kimchi to prevent audlt -oneset diseases and maintain one’s physical youth. the demand fo kimchi among the younger generations is climbing and the popularity for kimchi is also rising daily overseas.but import of kimchi are more than double  the exports almost kimchi  comes form china is consumed at eatery or our table. imported by china kimchi  is contaminated with pesticide.  it wasnot certain that kimchi imported by china  can’t be safe. government  ought  to strenghten regulations and systematicaly help consumers know what kind of Kimchi they are eating.

it was hard time to work in Airport for the last week.

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on April 2, 2006 at 10:48 pm

it was daily in march 28th.i suddenly was going to work in ICN-Airport.a friend of mine told me that  the working hour is dependens on  when the guest arrive. there is a conference ” Women for Peace” in ** Hotel. it estimated that  a number of guests  come to korean to take part in conference. so before taking a part in conference,  the mission is to pick up  guests  in front of each gate. and  take  guests to the hotel safely  by limousine. It was easy. i took a message late night.  they said.  first guest  would arrive in ICN  at  6:00 am. so now  i have to wake up before 4 o’clock. i set an alarm clock  at 4  but I woke up at 5 so i took a shower ASAP and put on suit and get to Airport.  it ’s five thirty and  i called the taxi and told driver to go to ICN Airport ASAP.  the taxi run toward Airport   with violence traffic of regulation. the driver  brought me to the ICN airport . it was six o’clock. and I went down  first floor for Arrival and go to the time schedule and checked the flight.    fortunetly,  Flight which took  guest from L.A  will arrive at six thirty. so I took a breath. Guest was to come out gate B. i will expect to see the guest  in gate B with holding a sign board 30m later, Guest who worn  a suit  and come closer to me. after eye contact each other. she made me smile.and I gave her  message. and then i  greet each other and check her name.  and i took her to the Limousine bus stop. and she took a limousine  I waved farewell , smiling at her till the bus had gone. after having gone, i called office of hotel and i had a breakfast . it was really hard time but  it realy please to meet Guest without any happens. it was really good job individually.

the Neet phenomenon

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on April 2, 2006 at 9:08 pm

it’s March 27th  there was only one class . I went to the library .and  come by  periodical center to read magazine. on the way to looking for magazines which are interested in.  I run into Times. although i had a headache, I saw one article. the artice is ” A Neet trick.” i was so wonder what did it  means of Neet ?  Neet is orginated in Japenese. recently The Neet phenomeon will spread  all around korean. and The  Neet means  “Standing  for Not in Education, Employment or Training.” in short word. people who don’t want to work and study etc. there are several people  suffering  from getting a job. the term was first used in England  in th late 1990 and now japen  picked it up to indicate unemployed people aged 15-34.  the term has also come into use in South Korea and china to describe an emerging problem after reading this article, i thought about my future.  it really got darkness of my future.  i am a senior and i  haven’t specially prepared yet. i am preparing for my goal  step by step. i am not sure it will be fine or not? however  we never  can see for tomorrow. conclusion that is the way to go forward my dream. it is only way to get there.

Rope-skipping

Uncategorized — Lee Ji Eun on April 1, 2006 at 9:38 am

I skip rope with my younger sister thesedays. Of course, this morning did it. I started it my younger sister’s recommendation at first. I naturally jogged during my leisure hours but  we have gotten wrapped up in rope-skipping. I did 1000 times at the most two weeks ago. It was very out of breathless and diifficult. However, I can do it 5000 times now. I want to have a nice figure through this exercise, so I will wear a bikini in this summer.     

Musical Yo Duk Story is a Hit!!!

Uncategorized — sunmyung on March 31, 2006 at 1:36 am

Yo Duk Story is emergeing from obscurity now. Until only a few weeks ago, Yo Duk had no future because of strange story and lack of funds. However, young people interested in North Korea and musical mania watch that musical several times, then they transmit  their impression about Yo Duk Story, so it contributes to Yo Duk rising in Korean musical.  Also, elementarary, middle and high school teachers take their students at the teatre to see the musial together. The teachers said, “I like the reality. It’s probably too brutal and shocking to children, but I just want to my students see the true North Korea as the Korean.”  The director, Jung Sung San, said that it is thanks to people who want and find the TRUTH. Yo Duk Story was in danger for a while, but it has busy itinerary now. Not only many local comunities such as In Cheon, Po Hang, Dae Jeon and so on but also the U.S. want to the musical come and performed. Up to it ends on April, 3rd almost every sits has already been booked, so Yo Duk decides to start extra play for fevered audience on April, 17th.  It will be a landmark in Korean whole history, not only Korean musical, because it is first step about free artistic presentation without interference of ideology among two Korea.

take a rest

Uncategorized — Lee bo ra on March 30, 2006 at 8:51 pm

today, I was so tired. I couldn’t get up in bed at morning. Nobody is in home.So I’d better take a rest. All appointments were cencled. I was in a bad temper without reason.ㅠㅠ

 

the meeting with friends on cyworld

Uncategorized — nami on March 30, 2006 at 11:11 am

  Almost young people have their mini-homepagy on cyworld, so they usually keep in touch with thier friends on line. That’s a suitable way to get along with person who they know nowadays. Also, they visit to their homepy and resgistered internet cafe something like that every day in spite of very hectic schudule. In addition, It helps to fill up our expression desire - all people want to show someone as themselves appearance.

 I just looked around my friends’ homepy on cyworld last night. They are my high school friends who I regard my precious and dear treasures in my life. We usually get together with each other during winter vacation, but it’s difficult to meet them these days cause some of them started to work and the others is senior who have to prepare their graduation thesis or find a job. I felt gladness and missing them after saw some pictures on their homepagy. Fortunately, It’s coming our regular meeting day every months. Since graduation in high school, we’ve been holding a regular meeting for communication continually.

 I think some real friends are very tremendous meaning in our life. They sometimes encourage me with some friendly advice, sometimes give me a life full of vitality. I’m really happy to meet them and to be thier real friend.      

March

Uncategorized — jiyoung on March 30, 2006 at 9:29 am

I like March. It’s a month something will get started. Flowers and trees begin to blossom all around and they would make surroundings as beautiful color like green,yellow,and so on. At this time, I have to wake up from a sweet vacation and  prepare for new semester. I buy a new planner and make a plan for the semester. In a classroom I chat with friends whom I coundn’t meet during the vacation. One more reason that I love march is because of  my birthday.For this chance, I can get presents from friends and family.Also I have a great time with them. It’s very exciting! 

cheesecake

Uncategorized — jiyoung on March 30, 2006 at 9:29 am

My sister loves making bread and cakes,sometimes cookies and chocholate. Thanks to her hobby, I am getting weight ,but anyhow I like her bread and cakes. she can make lots of bread and cakes such as sesame bread,croissant, muffin,strawberry Tart and so on. Wow, It sounds delicious! My favourite is her cheesecake. I can taste creame cheese of two-thirds and biscuit on the bottom.I want to know how to make these things. I am gonna ask her recipe now!

Raining day

Uncategorized — JooYoung on March 29, 2006 at 10:45 pm

 From late afternoon, it started raining. Today I don’t know that it rains. So I don’t prepared umbrella and get wet with rain. I don’t like raining day,because rain makes me depressed. So I annoy everything and tire easily. Today is also  very tired. and I don’t like to get out on raining day. So I almost saw DVD at home on raining day. The movie’s genre is  romantic comedy or thriller. I think that the most apposite weather to see the movie at home is likely to raining day. But today I don’t see the movie, because I have classes. So I miss it. I expect to stop raining tomorrow.

Dinner time

Uncategorized — Lee Ji Eun on March 29, 2006 at 6:57 pm

Yummy…
Today at dinner time our family ate some yummy foods. Actually it’s just normal like the other days. But today the dinner tasted better. We had a rice, Kim-che, Bul-go-gi, and cabbage soup. I ate a Kim-che a lot. Because the Kim-che weren’t hot, it was just…good.
At dinner time we talk about what we have done or what we wants to do. But my mother and my father always talks a lot at dinner time. They talks about rules or about presedent. When we listen to them we get confused that we couldn’t under stand very well. But anyway… I like dinner time.

my intimate friend

Uncategorized — YoonJung on March 28, 2006 at 3:08 pm

I have many friends ,and they are precious to me. Among them, I have one great partner. My partner’s name is Da Yeon, Lee. My old friend and I met when we were 15 years. Actually, we  were just a classmate. As we grow older, however, we became good company. We know thoroughly each other because we used to talk whenever come up against problems.  Now, we can’t meet frequently as past. we are very busy. But, we talk over the telephone about our each life story. 

I answer the telephone from her today. She is in bed with a cold. She didn’t catch cold easily. So, I’m anxious about her health. I’ll go to meet her over the weekend.

The Effects Engish has had on my Culture

Uncategorized — EUNSOO on March 28, 2006 at 12:33 pm

As the traffic is developed. the world become one. Therefore people in the world can

shaare and join their culture, food fashion and so on. My culture has been changed many

things by learning english.  I was a passive person before. I didn’t understand other’ life

 and mind set . But when I met many kind of race and have various experience with them

throuth learning english  , my mind was changed .I get possitive and can understand

others nore and more. And I knew that when I understand other’ life ,I can understand

their mind -set. Now I want to be a tourist .so I’d like to trip many country as possible as.

SUV

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on March 28, 2006 at 1:28 am

My neighbor  just bought a new SUV. It has bucket seats, GPS, a televion, and a stereo radio and CD changer. I would enjoy having  one too, but I have to continue driving my old clunker with 1000 kilometers on it. 

 

Tak

Uncategorized — EUNSOO on March 27, 2006 at 3:48 pm

My cousin was married last Saturday. I envied him .

 I was surprised because I he knew that he was a reflect person.

He looked happy and he was keeping smile . He did not talk ordinary times but he looked

defferent that day. He looked reallyhappy I hope they happy forever. I think when we

meet the other good sex , We can changed . I wish to meet the other good person as

soon as possible

High-school friend.

Uncategorized — JooYoung on March 27, 2006 at 1:27 pm

 I met high-school friend after the interval of a year,because we are so busy. So I’m glad to see her. She is my partner as third grade. She is very kind and positive. and we are able to communicate with each other. So I talk her about my worry and want to take advice. Today, we communicated about high-school recollection. and we long for that times. I pass really happy school times. So I always miss that times and value school friends. Nowdays, I more and more feel importance about them, because I think looking for best friend is very difficult as age is older and older. She also agreed about my idea. and she say ” high-school friends are likely to lifetime friends.” I think we can easier look for best friend at that time than now, because we maybe had more open and pure mind than now.               

Monday~!

Uncategorized — kyounghwa on March 27, 2006 at 12:02 pm

Today is Monday! It’s very refresh to me. What makes me think like that? Listen how I can analyze. 

First, Monday means a start. Even though I had hard time last several days, we could have a new start. We should not that the unpleasant and ominous past affects the present.

Secondly, I’m in a state that blows off my stress because we took a rest without any tension. We were in comfort during the weekend. Though we had to do some work, we could do that a time that isn’t set. The work isn’t right faced problem.

 

Thirdly, we think of this week and the future. 

We make a plan about what we have to do and how we lead our days such as we’ll do our best. So we have guides that we follow. We can’t help being full of hopes.   

 

Let’s start crisp Monday together~    

broke a vase

Uncategorized — JeongHun.La on March 26, 2006 at 11:16 pm

Nice weather wasn’t it ? it was really sunny yesterday. but  it wan’t good condition.  I woke up early in spite of weekends, i go directly to the place where i work in fitness center. I arrived in there quarter and start to work in sports center. i  cleaned the floor  and did  chore. sometimes took an exercise. during working , I broke flower vese which  the manager love. so I  cleared up a piece of broken glass ASAP.after that, I thought how should I restore flower vese. on the way to think about it,  the manager called me   “is everthing all right?”  he said. I told him  “everthing is all right”  so i temporarily put the flower in a cup of glass. and i rearranged them. it looked so on  a cup of glass. so I worked and took an exercise. in few hours, I shifted  next worker. the matter which broke the flower vase, will decide to tell the truths. it was really not good yesterday.anyway, With this event as a momentum, I said to myself that I will work carefully.

My English

Uncategorized — Lee Ji Eun on March 26, 2006 at 9:59 pm

 I have enrolled an english institute since April. What I have learned is speaking skill and conversation. I think my skill is poor because I have made really silly mistakes. For example, when I said about my sister, I begin like this. ‘ My sister is student. blah blah…’ and I say ‘… He have hoped to be a nurse, so he entered Red Cross Junior College.’ Sometimes I asked another student in the institution like this – ‘Are you live with your parents?’ I have not made mistakes like these when I wrote down in English. I also have another problems. When I talked with my own idea, I could not make myself clear. I could not organize and structurize my thought. It drove me much embarrassed and frustrated, so I got nervous. Then I totally collapsed at all, murmured really silly things. It seemed like a vicious circle. I was afraid when I spoke in front of people especially in English. The mystery is that when I said about complaint like ‘I am not okay at English. My English is so poor. Damn evil English!!!,’ I made sentences at once and spoke out very clearly. What was this? Anyway, I should spend more time and effort to get familiar with English speaking. I spent just two months intensively for it. I guess at least one or two years are needed to be fluent in English.

life

Uncategorized — YoonJung on March 26, 2006 at 5:49 pm

Everyone leads a varied life and experiences many changes in their life.

I’m no different. From 4, ballet was the aim of my life. The amount of practice increased more and more as I grow older, the situation didn’t admit of private affairs. Although it was in tolerable process, I had to manage to attain my ambition. Then one day, I lost my footing and collapsed on during the pratice. I felt a bad pain, my suffering was more than I could bear. I went to a hospital, and my doctor advised to quit, but I kept practicing in desregard of his advice. I cried with pain everyday. The problem could not bypassed. After all. I gave up my old dream. I spent lots of times inanely. My life was changed perfectly. But, in the mean time, I discovered  my new states. I had a new goal and spent yo valuable time with my friends and had enough time to do in favor of myself.

Present is quite different from what I expected. However, I’m very grateful for my new way. I’m learning about human society and growing up to be a woman.

Antiwar

Uncategorized — JooYoung on March 26, 2006 at 1:49 pm

 An antiwar demonstration becomes more and more rage in the whole world. I also agree it. I always think that war is struggle to get power between power offices. and innocent people exploit their struggle. That is,they are victims. They don’t know why they kill enemy and why they fight. Abusing this point, power offices inject wrong idea that war is for nation and peace. I don’t understand it and very angry. For example, America insist that terror doesn’t admit . So they don’t pardon it and should make a reprisal for Iraq’s freedom and world peace.

 What do you think about it? I think that their insistence has fatal error. Evil should not respond to evil. Evil should respond to mercy. That evil responds to evil makes worse circumstance. Violence lacking comprehension against terror makes endless fight. At result,we will remain only fatal damage and hurt.  

 

 

How to overcome bad feelings, and live agian

Uncategorized — sunmyung on March 26, 2006 at 8:47 am

People sometimes experience bad things suddenly, so shock and then break their routine themselves. However, we have to overcome something happens unexpectedly and live daily life again. How can we do that ?

Fist, CRYING! Crying out loud help your mood change better and calm your mind, so you can think right way. Expressing true emotion is important because it makes you comfotable without any word when you feel sad and depression.

Second, live MORE BUSILY than common days. If you are in home all day, anxiety grow more and more, and you can do nothing, finally you live with only profound depression. Busy days help you escape from sad plight and send you fresh energy for living. 

Third, listen to music or DO SOMETHING WHAT YOU LIKE. For example, cooking, watching movies or TV series, cross-stitching or out door activity like hinking. According to lately study, linstening music is good for purifying mind. If you don’t like music, you need to do other things for tired spirit.

Almost people dandle themselves because ‘my feeling’ isn’t a matter of other people and we have to live continueally whether something occur. Emotions closely resemble sensitive baby, so you must pay attention to your feelings, and give a hand whenever.

what a nice day

Uncategorized — hyojin on March 25, 2006 at 1:00 pm

really nice day today!

the sun has come out and it’s warm.

hope everyone has a good weekend.

Friday night

Uncategorized — nami on March 25, 2006 at 12:33 am

   I haven’t any classes on Friday so I spent most of the time to do my home work in the library of Hankuk University of Foreign Studies. It is located near my house and took only about 5 minutes by foot as well as It allows to residents to enter the library. I usually go to the library to study or to do my assignments than my university. That’s inevitable thing. When I reached there, there are nearly not any students owing to “Friday”-this is my guess. Almost students who hang out in campus at that time carried their a big burden for enjoying MT. But I thought that “That’s none of my business.” because I have so many things what I have to do. Maybe most of the seniors feel like that. After in a few hours my older sister called me and asked go out to eat. It was really happy news to me. I think  some delicious and sweet foods sometimes make me cheery mood. We ate ‘Sam gyup sal’(meat) with So ju(Korean achohol beverage).

   However, today the best thing is chat with my older sister. We seem like just friend so we always share with many worries and some important thing in our life. I spent very comfortable and present time with my sister after a long interval. Today is a great time.

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