Elementary Composition – Day

I live in sonpagu..my house near lotteworld. so I heard lotteworld’s news 

A few day ago person died in Lotteworld. Lotteworld said It’s just dead person’s problem. becaus the dead person is drunken.. but many people say that the dead person is drunken, but he said “safety bar isn’t tight”. though safetguard ignored his speaking. and..He’s gone

Later this accident..Lotteworld is unsafety problem one more time. They didn’t charge admission..A lot of people enter the Lotteworld had big Confusion. So many people hurted in lotteworld… However Lotterworld said it’s just a people’s problem

Since Well-being is popular, many people are begin diet. Above all the rest, most people expect more slim. And they choose many ways for diet. Yes! Diet have many diffrent ways. But, the most way is exercise! Exercise is most effective even if that take much time.

Exercise give a chance to systematic habits. That is most important thing. If you have systematic habits, you can achievement goal with unstudied ease. Also, exercise need to enough time. Constant efforts bear fruit at least. Exercise have other merit. But we can see for a two of reasons through above instant. So, If you want to slim body, I recommend exercise strongly!

I went to rest home for old people yesterday. So I got up at 5 o’clock, Because it was located near Bonghawsan station. Actually, at that time, I wasn’t in a good mood. Because the rest home is too far, and I was a little worried because I’m not sure that I would care for old people well. But, when I arrived and met them, one old lady said hello to me with a smile, so I felt relieved. And after that I cleaned bath rooms, took a walk with them. It was really hard, but it was a good experience.

Most of university students have their part-time job. Because they are young, and they have a lot of ambition. So, they earn money, and want to do something.

First, they want to travel to somewhere, kind of backpacking. Especially, they want to go to Europe. 

Second, they want to pay school fees by themselves. They don’t depend upon their parents anymore. Some of them earn just their pocket money. I think they are independent.

Third, they want to acquire some job experience. People who want to work for hotel, They work for hotel as a part-timer in advance.

At beginning of philosophy is nature philosopher of Ionia. The early days of philodophers were absorbed about nature. They were, so to speak, absorbed a creation of the universe and its movement, structure material. So, generally, they called nature philosopher. But there concern is not simple, like ‘nature’. Rather than, they aim the origin material of nature. With this they attempt to explain substance of existence. So we should understand there pursuit of nature by metaphysics.

The first runner of Ionia philosophy is Thales. So, Aristotles called Thales by father of philosophy. He also studied the origin. He claimed, the origin of world is water. Because, water has ‘motion change’ and ‘element of life’. And he also claimed hylozoism. hylozoism is a theory of nature circumstance, that think all substance oneself have a factor of dynamic force. Acording to this, he became a leader of Milesian school. And Anaximandros, Anaximenes succeed to Milesian school’s tradition.

After that Pytagoras, Herakleitos, Parmenides, Empedokles, Demokritos acceded to Ionia philosophy’s trend of thought.

When you become a university student and go to a party, you usually drink. You celebrate someone’s birthday, promotion and something is good things by drinking alcohol. You drink with people and you can have a good time. But, sometimes you drink a lot because of peer-pression even you want to stop to drink. If you are indicisive, it will happen very often. On the contrary, you drink because of depression. You try to get rid of your depression by drinking alcohol.

Nowadays, many people do extreame diet. They do fasting, too much work out and so on. I also did extreme diet before. But it is not very good. Becase extreme diet hurts our body and mind. Why? Because that kinds of diet have many problems such as food nagativism, addephagia, malnutrition, depression…and so force. So we should healthy diet instead of extreme diet.

To freshman of university!

Club activities enliven your college life. In festival period, many clubs hold a pub. Doing that, you will feel pleasure for episodes with friends. That’s not all. you will go to a membership camp (M.T. in Korea) two or three times a year. All of this activities will be your recollection. Preparing many events, you can make many friends. It helps improvement of human relations and social experience. Because you can learn many things more and more than doing nothing. And you’ll feel affection in human relations. Some clubs give you scholarship as a value you work.

You should not miss opportunity that will be valueable recollection in your life .

There are five reasons of ‘King And The Clows’s success.

 First, the movie had actors who were good at acting. The main actors were four. They all suited with their cast. Second, there were good cenario. It was from play ‘Yi’. It already succeed before the movie release. Generally, play has better cenario than movie. Third, there were various something to see in the movie. It was kinds of historical play. So we can see part of ‘Cho-sun’s culture, And the main actors are clowns in the movie, so we can also see many farces. Fourth, production was stabile. Almost scenes in the movie were good.(for exemple, angles, color, background….etc.)  And the background musics suited with the movie. Last, screen quater system helped the success. Screen quater pretect Korean movie against foreign movie. It also can be part of the reason.

Everybody knows, alcohol has both sides. Good and bad things. Maybe you know about both side. Especialliy, badthings. But you might be interested in. Why? It may be that you only say. ‘Alcohol gives to me a sense of freedom.’ or things like that. But it’s not genuine reason. It’s only a small part. The reason, almost, alcoholic high school kids drink for fellowship with teenage group. It resemble peer pressure of adults. And they may feel a sense of achivement.

  Many korean often enjoy drinking a lot in every situation such as playing after school, meeting the long time friend. but they don’t realize what it will be happened next day.some times, although a little drinking  is medicine, most of that case is damaged to their health.they need to be careful.  At first, drinking is influenced to lifestyle. for example, before you sleep night, you will suffer hangout next morning. so we have to be less drinking if we go to work next day. second, drinkgin a lot is fatal to your body. it causes diseases  as  liver cirrhosis. In this reason, maybe you’ll have to check your  condithon everyday.  High school boys and girls don’t need drinking a lot any longer.

Living in a dormintory room can be a precious experience that gives you a lot of fun and enjoyment. When you live in a dorm room, you get to meet various room mates. The people you hang out with are the ones that you chose to be friends with, but the room mates are not. So, you get to learn how to get along with the people who are a lot different from you and whose personalities are not really familiar to you. This is what makes you grow up, and helps you to be friendly to people. In addition, when you have good relationships with your room mates, it would be awesome to spentd time with them in the same space, always. Moreover, you can save your time and money you spend to commute to school everyday. You can even get up just an hour before your class begins, and you would never be late. And the money you spend for the subway or bus, you don’t need it. You can just walk to the class.

Most successful people get up early and starts do something earlier than others. They can prepare to work to do in day, or meditate with breathing fresh air. And there’re various thing to do in the morning, slow exercise is the best effective activity.
Famous slow exercises are Pilates, core, Yoga, and Taichi and so on. These are different nationality and ways. But as you try them, you can realize commonness. For example, their slow motions, positions, and functions.
Slow exercises do your body good in many aspects. While sleeping, human’s body has wrong position and makes a lump one part. So body has to limber up the muscles. Otherwise, it is easy to pain your body or have poor position for a long time. Slow exercises improve pliability and muscles. Besides, healing sore part like legs, arms, back as well as internal organs. And it makes your body healthier, stronger and effect to lose weight.
A little different makes successful your life. And exercise in the morning is great changing your repeat and bored life into fresh, and energetic. 
 

I’m a sophomore. Even though there are so many things that I have to study, I always enjoy my school life. Many people might curious what’s so enjoyable. I’ll tell you the reason. Actually I’m a member of on club which called O.B.F. If you are CUK student, you might hear about that name. O.B.F. is the name of English Café in the campus. I work there as a master. Master means the worker in the O.B.F. We decide to call us as a master because the café rolled by us.
           I really enjoy working in O.B.F. because there are so many benefits. The first benefit is I could practice my speaking skills in there. I went to abroad long time ago, so when I enter this café I almost forgot how to speak English. But now, I know how to speak even I’m not very good. I could get a confidence of speaking English. And I don’t need to spend money for going to the English academy.
           Second benefit is I could meet many kinds of people in the O.B.F. There are so many students who came to O.B.F. and want to talk with masters. Because of this I could make a lot of friends who is not same major with me.
           The third benefit is I could be friendly with foreign professors, and I could experience the western culture through the events in the O.B.F. In here, we have some events at special day in western such Halloween, Eater. And we also hold a Pops Concert at school festival. Be Friendly with foreign professors is also really helpful to improve my speaking ability and learn many culture things.
           Because of these kinds of benefits I really love to work at the O.B.F. and It helps me to having funny school life.

You should not drink alcohol because drinking can cause serious problems. You probably think people who drink a lot seem to be cool, but they are killing themselves. When you go to a college or get a job, it’s inevitable for you to drink at least once in a while for your social life. However,  You should not blame anyone for your behavior of drinking often. You should control yourself because you are an adult.

Do you have any ideas how important your liver is? If your liver gets sick it will cause various diseases such as a cancer, and you already know a lot of people are dying because of that. You can maintain your health just by driking little. You should not appreciate the blessing of health until you lose it. Drinking can cause another somthing awful. If you drink and drive, you are commiting a suiside. It doen’t matter how much you drink. Thesedays many poeple have a hectic lfe. Most of them go to school or go to work. Some people do both of them for their valuable lives. They have somthing in common. They are tired and exhasueted with too much work.  Here is an example of a story.  A mas is driving a car. A picture of his precious daughter is smiling at him on the front window. He cannot wait to see her and her mom tonight because he got promoted. An hour ago, his coworkers celebrated his promotion with a couple of bottles of beers. He rejected the offer of drinking at first because he brought his car today, but his friends didn’t let him go home without a party. It was a long day. Now, he dreams of buying a new house and living happily ever after with his family. Then, somthing horrible happened. It turned out he was too tired to drive in soberness after drinking. This kind of accident can happen to you too. You are not an exception.

Therefore, you should be careful of your behavior when you drink after graduation. You can enjoy drinking with a proper amount of alcohol in a suitable situation because you are smart enough to be aware of them. Don’t forget to think of you as an adult who can control yourself wisely.

  Over the past several decades, it has been prosperous era for skinny girls. As a person who is not skinny, I have to say something about the concept of beauty. It may show that I am telling this beacause I am not a “It girl”. Yes, it could be true and somewhat is right. If I don’t have any problem with that, probably I won’t mention it ,but most of any complaints and counter-opinions are formd from minority or the opressed from any reasons,so I want to make my point to the abusurd idea of what beauty is.

 Do you know the fact that there are ony three sizes in clothings? There are size 44, 55 ,and 66. What I want to ask you is do those sizes fit into every korean women? No, it is not true and it can not be true. There are many many different sizes and figures of people live in korea who are  beatiful enough. It implies that they can not categorize into just 3 options. However, fashion industry and media enforce korean women be like Barbie.  Barbie is not a human. It is just a doll which is for playing for kids. To be like a Baibie doesn’t make any sense to beauty.It is not a real beauty. Nevertheless, you want to become like it and love it like a religion.

 What  you should focus on  first is finding own beauty. It is not a whole idea of seaching your charmingness by losing your weight or shaping your body like tooth pick. It could be a way to chiesel yourself. It could be a secondary way ,but not  the way! There are many diverse ways you become a beautiful person by filling yourself  in the way that reading and having  profitable habbits like joining wine club or studying other languages. Then second thing you need to do is  write a letter or use any other sources that you can reach to the evil fashion indusrty and media that make you get suffered. Make a new concept of beauty and let them know size in 77 or 88 are also beautiful.Take an action! Maybe you have a little power against  giant copanies or broadcasting centers ,but don’t haveto be afraid of them. You are not alone who don’t like them. Lump your power together and make the critical voice and let  them realize they are wrong over and over. Everything can be changed ,so Social concepts too.

 It might be tough to break the idea of routined beauty,but if you are so sure about it and want  to change, do it, just do it. Make sure that you belive in yourself that you are beautiful no matter what other sknny people say and keep trying to be attractive not just in pysical things but for your real inner beauty. That’s the point. Inner beauty and the power from your inner side that can make changes to anything.

We bought a new house . We lived here during 11 years. I must be miss this house. I don’t forget first day when we moved here . My mom was so happy. I had  a large family ,but my father earned money alone. We were not rich so we couldn’t buy bic house. After we grow and my grandparents died. We can buy it. Now we have to leave here. We will move new house better than here. My mom is so happy again.

Yesterday I met my friends, in GaeBong. We went to Hof(my one of the friends’s mother manages that Hof). We drank beer and ate chicken together. But at that time was very late. And my house was very far. So I couldn’t drink beer. I just talked with they and ate chicken! We couldn’t meet very long time. So I was very happy! We cuoldn’t feel flow time so much! When I knew my mother called me, I was very suprise. Because time flew very fast! Lacking but I must going home.

There are bad things about alcohol that harm your health. If you have much alcohol, the typical problem that harm your health is liver-damage. Also, It affects the stomach. The next day you drink, you will have a burning feeling in your stomach, so you will hang over. Many cancers come from alcohol, and bring about death after all.

Alcohol causes mental disorder. There are uneasiness, depression, defects of memory and so on. And alcohol addiction is fatal.

A proper amount of alcohol have a good effect our body. But, unless you moderate, alcohol approach as frightful being. 

Do you like taking with other person?

I want to tell you the important things to talk with other people.

The real heart is the best important when you talk with other! 

If other person feel real heart of you, other person open heart to you,too.

and you feel improve relation with the friends.

Open your mind with confidence.

Everyone, I want to make sure you understand what I said in class when I said that you should use paragraphs. So I’m going to use some Latin text. The meaning of the text doesn’t matter: just the layout, the format. Okay? Just look at how it’s organized and you’ll see what I mean.

Here’s an example of what you SHOULD NOT do when writing a paragraph:

Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit.

Nam volutpat feugiat massa.

Integer et mauris.

Donec malesuada mi eget est.

Morbi tortor est, rhoncus eu, placerat sit amet, ultrices vel, enim.

Duis vulputate.

Nullam blandit arcu vitae quam.

Donec vel augue quis enim blandit rutrum.

And here’s an example of what you SHOULD do when writing a paragraph:

The first example isn’t a paragraph. It’s just a bunch of sentences one by one, which is NOT what I am asking you to write. The second example is of two nicely written paragraphs. Of course, you can’t really indent on this blog, but normally the second paragraph would be indented, if you were printing this text to hand in as homework.

Does that help?

Do you have ever drunk?

How many times?

what do you think how dangerous drinking is?

Drinking injures you various ways.

First, there is high probability of alcohol addition.

Alcohol addition makes you don’t takes normal lives.

 Alcohl additioners  usually drinking all the time.

They don’t know when to work when to break.

So during morning or afternoon they get on beer or soju.

If they don’t get on alcohol, they will fell down mental confusion.

It’s core dangerous of addition.

Also heavy drinking cause liver damages.

Liver damage could kill you.

But liver don’t be exposed the progress of damage until that almost reach to ending.

So you will don’t know that you and your liver are going to die.

Finally drinking makes you unrational.

Actually many drunkers drive a car while on much drink.

It is not rational actions.

It is a crime.

But alcohol makes you don’t right judgement.

Drink driving could causes killing the driver and other innocence people.

Drinking could hurt you and  also kill you. You will have to remembe thr danger of alcohol.

 Thesedays, environmental pollutions are getting more and more keenly. Environment is made of air, soil and water so on. Among them, air pollution seems to be serious. Air can be polluted with smoke from cars or factories. In addition, the destruction of forests and heating at homes are contributing to the greenhouse effect can make air hard to circulate. Second, soil pollution would be caused trash, waste-water and agrichemicals. Waste-water including domestic sewage and industrial wastewater can also cause water pollution. Not only them but also eutrophication and detergent could let waters decayed. What we have to solve these problems is to practice every little count things we can do. Such as campaigs, recycling and planting trees or flowers can keep our circumstances healthy. Conservation movements could recover our spoiled surroundings. Why don’t we start till now?

You can stress-release without alcohol.

Many people drink a lot when they have a lot of stress.

But don’t do that.

If you have a lot of stress , you can release it.

You can chatter with your friends, play sports game, instead of drinking alcohol.

That is the very good way.

In ancient time, we know that ancestors had making alcohol skills. Usually It was used to  offer to a god in religious ceremony or refine someone who became adult. These hand down from generation to generation, our contemporaries also prepare alcohol in many situations. For example, they can be  wedding, ceremony, and so on. Besides, having great events or congratulations or a feeling nice, people drink for elevating their joyful emotion. therefore when people gloomy, they are likely to drink and make a gloomy mood. It means depression can be solved the way of deepening their emotion. But that is not always good solution.

      Many adults drink alcohol but we don’t quite understand why they drink. There are some reasons that drives adults to drink alcohol.

      The first reason is because of depression. During the life, there are so many things which make people depressed. To be surviving in our society, there are so many difficulties. So, life is never going easy. Not just like high school life. And also there are no many things to release stress for adults. Because of this many adults prefer to drink alcohol to release their stresses.

      Second reason is for celebration. Wherever there is something to celebrate, the alcohol is always there. Many adults like to drink alcohol because they believe that some alcohol helps the people more cheerful and funny. Actually that’s right little amount of alcohol is ok, however more than little would ruin the celebration. And for the high school students even small amount of alcohol could ruin the celebration because they are not yet ready to drink alcohol.

      Third reason is because of peer pressure. Some times many adults also don’t want to drink an alcohol but some peer asked him/her to drink together. At this kinds of situation most of people can’t say no because they are their friends.

      These three reasons are the biggest reasons which make adults drink alcohol. I’m not sure you could understand adults now, but please try to understand and do not imitate the adults when you are student.